Friday, April 19, 2019
Sharing is Caring
This book is awesome! I have not had this much fun reading a book in a long time! I sure hope I remember all the rules when I die, so I will have a head start to getting my permit! Excellently edited and well written! The way it is set up is perfect! I liked the list of choices of types of haunts, where to take vacations, laughing as I turned each page! What a unique and delightful book!
I was drawn into this story quickly! I loved the way the author weaved her tale of a haunted house and a voodoo curse. The descriptions of the area involved reminded me of when I drove through Louisiana, spooky in itself! The characters were easy to relate to and the situation was almost believable.
Elsie and her family are Illinois Yankee transplants in Tennessee. Elsie's way of facing problems is to run, literally. Her mother works cleaning houses while her father is trying to grow peppers. Elsie is an artist and is finally going to exhibit her work at the fair. Thanks to her best friend, she is starting to get some attention but her father's tumor sends him into a seizure. A young man, Tyler Vaughn, comes to the rescue and helps get medical attention. This chance encounter leads to sparks between the two. Tyler, it turns out is the grandson of the richest woman her mother works for, and that lady hates Elsie. Tyler and Elsie are drawn to each other, but Elsie is worried their relationship will cost her mother her job. The tension of young love with the back story of prejudice and the impending death of her father is palpable. This story is amazingly well written. I will not give any more info because I hate knowing how books end, it runs the fun of reading. This book is well worth buying. The characters are well developed, the plot is full of twists and unexpected results. Kudos! I can't wait to see more from this author.
When you hear someone has an addiction, perfume is not really where your mind goes. Well, Carla is definitely addicted to it. It is a constant in her life and her crutch as she faces her midlife crisis. A new neighbor and an accident brings the past forward and Carla faces it head on. The style this is written in reminds me of a diary, like I am reading Carla's private thoughts. The details about the different perfumes would have annoyed me had it not been for assuming this perspective. When you talk to yourself, you really don't care if you are exciting. I was invested in Carla and was hoping her travels led her to happiness. Not saying if it did but...
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Thursday, April 18, 2019
Deadly Deception Book 1
By P. J. Mann
This has
been the first series I have written in my short career of writing. At the
moment I have published the first two books of what is supposed to be a trilogy,
and quite soon I will be able to publish
the final book.
So let’s start
with the first one. Just like many times it happens, this was not supposed to
be a series, rather it was just a way to experiment something new; a novella.
I found it
quite challenging because I had to squeeze in a short amount of pages what I
generally describe in a full novel.
As I was
going to finish and making it ready for the editor, something strange happened,
I wanted to know more about the story, and
the characters got better ideas. It was then when I thought that since I was
experimenting a novella, I could have also experimented a series, and so I
modified it in a way to create the premises for a second book, at least.
But let’s
talk about the story.
The first
book is about a young man, Ethan Jackson, who had his life ruined by a
compulsive lying disorder. He believes, and
he wishes to tell the truth, but his brain
is messing up facts and people when he tries to remember it.
He will seek
for help at the studio of Dr. Wright, a psychiatrist who seems very interested
in Ethan’s problem and offers him a very unusual therapy: traveling the world
and keep records on a diary.
Everything
seems to go as smooth as velvet when in
the middle of the treatment, he finds himself in Georgia, he is accused of
murder. As usual, the embassy helps him find
a lawyer, and his family and friends will offer moral sustain. However, Ethan
is sure he would never kill anyone, but he cannot remember anything about the
previous night. Everything he remembers is that he was with the girl who had
been murdered the night before.
With his
freedom and sanity at stake, the truth seems to be further from Ethan’s grasp
than ever. But then, if he wants to keep his freedom, perhaps lies are all he
can depend on.
Excerpt:
I was
agitated the whole night, and when someone knocked at my door the next morning,
at 11:30 A.M., I felt like they drove over me with a truck.
It took me
what it seemed an eternity to stand up on my feet, as whoever was on the other
side of the door, knocking, already became my enemy number one.
“I am
coming. Please, a bit of patience,” I said as I was dressing up.
I opened
the door, and a man with two officers asked me if they could come in.
“Yes, of
course. I just woke up, so it is a bit messy,” I said, welcoming them in.
“We are
sorry for this inconvenience, I am Detective Giorgi Bochorishvili, and those
are Officers Esadze and Kazbegi,” he said, coming in.
“I don’t
understand. Is there anything wrong?” I asked, still wondering about that
visit.
“You can
say so. Between yesterday evening and this morning, a woman has been killed in
this hotel,” he said, taking out a picture. “Have you ever seen her?”
I took the
picture in my hand and looked at it carefully. She looked familiar, but my mind
was still foggy.
“I don’t
think so. I am not sure, though. Maybe I have seen her in this hotel,” I
replied. “Is she a guest?”
“Not
really. She is an escort and used to go around telling people that she works for
this hotel - which is not true - offering a safe sexual service,” he explained
as the other two officers looked around.
“A murder…”
I mumbled to myself, trying to recall whatever happened the evening before,
knowing anyway that my brain would have messed up some, if not all, the details. However, something I was sure about
was that I hadn’t killed anyone, nor had I heard anything coming from the
corridors.
If there had been a murder, the assassin must
have been very cautious in not making any noise, I considered.
“Is there
anyone else you are sharing this room with?” asked the Detective.
“No, I am
alone.”
“Could you
explain this, then?” he said, grabbing a lipstick from the floor. “It doesn’t
seem to be your shade.”
I stared at
it, not knowing what I should say.
“So?” he
pursued.
“I don’t
know. I don’t remember.”
“Let’s put
it this way,” he started to say, “I am not here to put someone in jail for
having sex with a prostitute, but to nail a killer. Are you telling me the
truth when you say you haven’t seen this woman?”
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Wednesday, April 17, 2019
Natalie Babbitt
Natalie Babbitt
Christina Weigand
I’m going to continue my Author series with Natalie Babbitt. Until recently I must admit I had never heard of Ms. Babbitt. That is a sad thing, because recently when I heard about one of her books Tuck Everlasting, I was surprised that I hadn’t heard about her. So I went out and found a used copy of her book and purchased it. I have yet to start reading it because my TBR pile is quite high. I did however read the back cover blurb and realized it was a book I wanted to read and an author I wanted to know more about.
Natalie Zane Moore was born July 28, 1932 in Dayton, Ohio.
She went to school in Cleveland and later Smith College in Northampton
Massachusetts and Kirkland College in Clinton, Oneida County, New York. She
married Samuel Babbitt and they lived in New Haven Connecticut where they had
three children.
Her first journey into the writing and illustrating world, The Forty Ninth Magician, a picture
book, was a collaboration with her husband.
After this book was published her husband became too busy to collaborate, so he
encouraged her to continue writing and illustrating. She wrote two short books
in verse before moving onto children’s novels.
In 1970 she published Knee-Knock Rise and was awarded a Newbury Honor in 1971.
After that she went onto write many children’s novels including Tuck Everlasting in 1975, named ALA Notable book,
and The Eyes of the Amaryllis in 1977 and many others.
Both Tuck Everlasting and The Eyes of the Amaryllis were adapted as movies. Tuck Everlasting was also adapted as a Broadway musical.
Along with being a writer she was also an illustrator. Valerie Worth wrote Small Poems along with a couple of others which she asked Babbitt to illustrate.
In 2016 Babbitt was diagnosed with lung cancer and died at her home in Hamden, Connecticut on October 31, 2016. So even though her body was not immortal her works drink from the spring of immortality and leave a lasting legacy for children across the world.
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Tuesday, April 16, 2019
That Pesky Comma: Part 2 by Erika M Szabo
Where does it belong?
By Erika M Szabo
I learned English as an adult and the comma became my worst nightmare when I started writing.
Where it's needed and don't need it?
I rely on the editors to catch my mistakes, but I really should use my cheat-sheet more often. I bet my editor would have fewer headaches.
Read the first part of my cheat-sheet here:
https://asmallgangofauthors.blogspot.com/2019/03/that-pesky-comma-by-erika-m-szabo.html
My cheat-sheet continued:
Use a comma to separate each element in an address. Also use a comma after a city-state combination within a sentence.
I work at 234 South Street, New York, 10045.
Also use a comma to separate the elements in a full date (weekday, month and day, and year). Also separate a combination of those elements from the rest of the sentence with commas.
March 15, 2019, was a strange day.
Friday, March 15, 2019, was a strange day.
You don't need to add a comma when the sentence mentions only the month and year.
March 2019 was a strange month.
Use a comma when the first word of the sentence is freestanding "yes" or "no."
Yes, I saw a fox when I went running.
No, the fox didn't bite me.
Use a comma when directly addressing someone or something in a sentence.
My boss often asks, "Cathy, did you read the new policy yet?"
Incorrect placement of the comma leads to confusion and misunderstanding.
Stop clubbing baby seals!
It looks like an order to desist harming baby seals.
Stop clubbing, baby seals!
Now it prompts baby seals to stop clubbing.
Use a comma between two adjectives that modify the same noun.
I saw the big, mean fox when I went running.
Use a comma to offset negation in a sentence.
I saw a fox, not a baby seal, when I went running.
Also use commas when any distinct shift occurs in the sentence or thought process.
The cloud looked like an animal, perhaps a baby elephant.
Use commas before every sequence of three numbers when writing a number larger than 999. (Two exceptions are writing years and house numbers.)
10,000 or 1,304,687.
Read the first part of article about the Pesky Rules:
https://asmallgangofauthors.blogspot.com/2019/04/the-pesky-rules-1.html
Next week we'll talk about "its versus it's", "then versus than", "nor versus or" and many other pesky rules. Don't miss the post!
Yesterday was a great day, my book trailer video was chosen to be on of the winners in the Bookish Video Contest:
Cursed Bloodline
https://asmallgangofauthors.blogspot.com/2019/04/winners-of-bookish-video-contest.html
Monday, April 15, 2019
Winners of the Bookish Video Contest
Congrats to the winners!
The following 3 videos received the highest number of votes and ratings in the contest.
See the entered videos here:
https://asmallgangofauthors.blogspot.com/p/bookish-video-contest.html
See the entered videos here:
https://asmallgangofauthors.blogspot.com/p/bookish-video-contest.html
The Winners
Chaos of Souls
Ethereal Custody: Anthologies
Cursed Bloodline
Congrats to the winners, great job!
Our next contest:
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Saturday, April 13, 2019
6 Days Blog-Hop May 12-17 at Our Author Gang
Play and win prizes
Visit every blog that participates in this fun blog-hop and collect 12 words (hidden in the text of the posts between 6 asterisks (such as ***different words on each blog***)
If you visit every blog on the list at the end of this post and collect the 12 words, you'll have a quote about writing.
Prizes:
Grand prize $30 gift card
or one of the 3 smaller prizes: $5 gift card each.
How to enter the contest
Visit every blog from May 12-17 on the list below and find the hidden word in each post. On May 17 at the last stop of the 6 days long blog-hop you'll be directed back to this post.
We will add a Google form where you can enter the 12 words long sentence which you'll collect word by word from each blog.
The blog-hop dates and links:
#1 stop May 12
Erika M Szabo's blog:
#2 stop May 12
Christina Weigand's blog:
#3 stop May 13
Eva Pasco's blog:
#4 stop May 13:
Rebecca Tran's blog:
#5 stop May 14
Sonnet O'Dell's blog:
#6 stop May 14
Heather Hobbs' blog:
#7 stop May 15
Dorothy Garino's blog:
#8 stop May 15
Cindy J. Smith's blog:
#9 stop May 16
Patty MacFarlene's blog:
#10 stop May 16
PJ Mann's blog:
#11 stop May 17
Karina Kantas' blog:
#12 stop May 17
Erika M Szabo's blog:
Have fun!
Friday, April 12, 2019
The 'Yay Journal"
The
‘Yay’ Journal~
Lorraine Carey
I
had read about keeping a ‘Yay’ journal a few weeks ago in one of my magazines.
The purpose is to find all the good things that went right in your day—be it
big or small. This concept is to promote positive thinking by having to list at
least three things and building up to as many as you can muster. The end result
is that it will cause one to not only see the little things were actually just
as important as the bigger things but your list will get longer and longer. And
the magic is that positive brings positive and you’ll find that your days
actually do look brighter.
Okay—so
I thought I’d give it a go and see what happens. Why did I feel as though I
needed this? I was in a slump, feeling low and literally no motivation to write.
I also was fighting off a bout of depression. I figured this just might be the
tool to get me looking on the brighter side and would boost my mood to get my
juices flowing.
I
have to admit, it was hard for me to start this process. When my husband asked
me what I wrote in my journal I had to tell him I couldn’t find anything to
‘Yay’ about. So with that I went back
and really had to analyze my day. I did manage to come up with a few small
events. It was hard to even find one. Pretty say, I’d say. As the days went on
I began to find more things to list and my mood lifted. I actually began to
realize smaller things that I would never have given a thought to before would
be the ones I would consider of value to list in my journal.
My
daily list has increased from three items to at least 7 or more! I have to say
this concept is working—at least for me. My mood is brighter and I feel so
blessed to see so many good things that have occurred in my day that I never
would have thought were so valuable before.
And the real beauty is going back over the past few days and reading all
of the ‘Yays’ from the previous days.
And
with that, I can now list another ‘Yay’ now that I have finished this little
blog.
Author
Lorraine Carey
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Thursday, April 11, 2019
Jasmine's Wish Fulfilled
Gift to My Angel
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In 2011, I found myself traveling down a road I never dreamed I would. I have written poetry as long as I can remember. I write whatever comes into my head. All feelings, all problems faced directly. Some were based on personal experiences, others just on observations of the world. I usually write in the first person, so no one would feel targeted should they happen upon one of my notebooks and read a poem. I wanted everyone to know they were not alone, even if I would not let them see my words. Because of one teacher, rarely would I let anyone outside of my immediate family see my scribbles. My daughter, Jasmine did send one of my poems out for a contest. When it was selected to be published, she felt she had proof my poems should be in a book. I let her send them off and when no response was ever received, I declared the proof on my side. She read every thing I wrote and never stopped encouraging me to put them out into the world. But, I never let her talk me into sharing again.
After her passing, I joined Facebook in an attempt to connect with her profile to share with her daughter when she grew up. I found friends who helped me cope with my heartache and loneliness. A chance share on social media of a poem led to the publication of my first book, Voices In My Head. The whole experience seemed like a whirlwind. So many friends supporting me, encouraging me to put my words out there.
Their continuous spurring on was fed by my daughter's voice whispering in my mind. Even from her perch in heaven, she was still urging me to publish, to share my thoughts with the world. In her memory, and to quiet my friends, I did publish. I had no idea how many poems should be in a book, so I just put every one on my computer inside. With a feeling of excitement and dread, I sent my heart out into the world.
The pats on the back from my internet friends fed my ego and I almost started to believe I might be a poet. Perhaps I really did write good poems, ones that would give hope to the reader. As the novelty of the new book faded, the blinders I had been wearing disappeared. Finding readers willing to purchase my poems was not going to be easy.
Lots of people are willing to say you write well and they really love your work, as long as they are able to read it for free. Testifying to how much work and money goes into publishing seems to fall on deaf ears. Although many will pay big bucks for a cup of coffee, spending money to help support a friend's dream is a completely different matter. Even suggesting they could help in a way that is free, like telling people how much they enjoy your work or just sharing your promotions appears to be imposing too much.
Still, I tried to believe in their praise. The dream of being understood dangles like a carrot in front of my eyes. Publish again, they said. A second book will get people to buy the first one. Well, I did publish again 2 years later. Then I tried a sample book 2 years after that. Funny, despite little interest, I published 2 more books. This year, I finished the series that started with Voices In My Head. The tribute to my daughter's dream. "QUIET! Please?" and "Silence" will join "Voices In My Head" and "They Won't Shut Up". My personal viewpoint, my life in rhyme, collectively called Jasmine's Wish, finally fulfilled. Will any care, probably not many. But I will know I did my best to fulfill my daughter's dream and she will be smiling as she looks down on me.
JASMINE'S WISH
My daughter's wish
At last fulfilled
Path to success
Mostly uphill
Obstacles found
Along the way
Kept my desire
My faith, at bay
Her opinion
Kept me going
Though my doubt was
Overflowing
It took her death
To make it real
Poems no longer
Would I conceal
As she looks down
I hope she knows
My love for her
Forever grows
I dedicate
These books to her
Fulfilled this wish
Only for her
She's now a star
I wish upon
Shining on me
As I move on
Jasmine dear
You shine so bright
Hope these tomes bring
You some delight
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Wednesday, April 10, 2019
The Pesky Rules #1
Learning the English language rules is not easy!
Oh, the joy of learning English!
In March I shared my cheat-sheet about the pesky comma.
I learned English as an adult and the comma became my worst nightmare when I started writing.
Where it's needed and don't need it?
I rely on the editors to catch my mistakes, but I really should use my cheat-sheet more often. I bet my editor would have fewer headaches.
Where it's needed and don't need it?
I rely on the editors to catch my mistakes, but I really should use my cheat-sheet more often. I bet my editor would have fewer headaches.
I will continue sharing my cheat-sheet next week about the use of the pesky comma.
But this week let's talk about some of the pesky rules:
Normally, an apostrophe symbolizes possession: "I took Mandy's purse."
Apostrophes can also replace omitted letters: "I don't, I can't."
When used as a possessive pronoun: "The dog had a toy. I took its toy."
For the shortened version of "it is" use the version with the apostrophe: "It's raining outside."
Fewer or less?
We use "fewer" when discussing something countable: "Fewer than ten people saw the flying object."
We use "less" for intangible concepts: "I spent less than one hour coloring the picture."
Dangling modifiers
These are ambiguous, adjectival clauses at the beginning or end of sentences that often don't modify the right word or phrase:
"Rotting in the pantry, our Mandy threw the onions in the garbage." The structure of this sentence implies that Mandy is a zombie rotting in the pantry.
But when you place the modifying clause right next to the word or phrase it intends to describe:
"Mandy, threw the onions, rotting in the pantry, in the garbage." Then we know the onions went bad in the pantry and not Mandy.
Me, myself, or I?
Me and I always function. as the object.
"My friend and I went to lunch."
"Sara asked Betty and me to go hiking."
"I ate five apples."
When you've referred to yourself earlier in the sentence: "I made myself breakfast."
Who or whom?
It's not always easy to tell subjects from objects but to use an over-simplified yet good, general rule: subjects start sentences (or clauses), and objects end them.
"Who is a bully?"
"Careful whom you call a bully."
Lie or lay?
This is a pretty confusing rule:
The word "lay" must have an object, so we don't say: "I'm going to go lay down." Someone lays something somewhere: "Mandy lays her pen on the table."
You lie. Unless you lay, which means lie but in the past tense:
Present Past
Lie Lie Lay
Lay Lay Laid
Next time we'll talk about nor versus or, than versus then, irregular verbs and a few other things, and I will continue sharing the pesky comma rules cheat-sheet. Don't miss the posts!
In this short story collection I mentioned a few stories about the humorous part of learning a new language along with stories from my nursing years.
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