Tuesday, March 11, 2025

Flash Fiction Challenge 6 at #OurAuthorGang

 Challenge accepted by Erika M Szabo

Pepper


It had been a spur-of-the-moment decision for the man to visit the animal shelter that day. He had been feeling particularly low and thought that spending some time with animals might help lift his spirits. As soon as he walked into the shelter, he was greeted by a cacophony of barks and meows.

But then he saw the dog, sitting quietly in its kennel, looking up at him with soulful eyes, he felt an instant connection with the dog but he was hesitant. He didn't know much about caring for dogs and he wasn't sure if he would be able to handle the responsibility. But the shelter staff assured him that Pepper was gentle and easygoing dog, perfect for someone who lives alone.

So, after filling out all the necessary paperwork and undergoing a brief home check, the man brought home his new best friend. In the beginning, it was a bit of an adjustment for both of them. The dog, who had spent most of its days in a shelter, was now being introduced to a warm and loving home for the first time in his life. And the man was learning how to take care of this beautiful creature who seemed to sense his every emotion.

As days went by, their bond grew stronger as they got used to each other's routines and habits. Pepper quickly became attuned to the man's mood, sensing when he needed comfort or when he just wanted some space. Whenever the man felt overwhelmed with his depression or anxiety, he would turn to his dog for support. Pepper would rest its head on his lap or nuzzle against him until he calmed down. It was like having a constant source of love and understanding by his side. The man also found himself opening up more to the dog than anyone else in his life. He would tell Pepper all his fears, worries, and doubts without any fear of being judged or pitied.

He remembered the time when he had lost his job and felt like his whole world was crashing down. He had sat on the couch, feeling defeated and hopeless, when the dog came and curled up next to him. Its warmth and presence were enough to make him feel better.

Then there was the time when his doctor tried to find the right medication to control his panic attacks, he had gone through a tough time. He cried himself to sleep every night, but the dog would lie next to him, offering silent support until he fell asleep. The man realized that Pepper's natural instinct to offer comfort and love was exactly what he needed during those difficult times.

The bond between them only grew stronger with each passing day. The man found himself relying on the dog more than ever, not just for emotional support but also as a source of joy and happiness. Together they would go for walks in the park, play fetch in their backyard, or simply cuddle up on the couch watching TV. The man couldn't imagine his life without this furry friend who had brought so much love into it. And as they continued their journey together, both man and dog knew that they had found something special in each other - a bond that could never be broken.

Twelve years flew by but now, as he sobbed into Pepper’s fur, he knew that their time together was limited. The vet had just given him the heartbreaking news that the dog's condition was terminal, and it would only be a matter of weeks before he passed away.

Through tears and sobs, the man whispered words of love and gratitude to the dog, thanking him for being there when no one else was. As he wiped away his tears, the man made a promise to always be there for this loyal companion who had never left his side. And with that thought in mind, he hugged the dog tightly once again.

The man knew that no matter what happened in life, this dog would always hold a special place in his heart for being more than just a pet - but a true emotional support companion who had changed his life forever.

Erika M Szabo

https://authorerikamszabo.com

Erika loves to dance to her own tunes and follow her dreams, introducing her story-writing skills and her books that are based on creative imagination with themes such as magical realism, alternate history, urban fantasy, cozy mystery, sweet romance, and supernatural stories. Her children’s stories are informative and educational and deliver moral values in a non-preachy way.

Monday, March 10, 2025

Campfire Stories 10 at #OurAuthorGang

 A short story by Guest Author Sara Sartagne

You can’t tell a book by its cover

Dan threw another log on the fire, and a plume of smoke rose from the flames. With a sigh, he sank onto the ground, picked up his coffee and raised an eyebrow at Carla and Joe, sprawled on a rug. Carla smiled lazily through the haze of the fire and then gazed at the darkening heavens.

“The stars out here are amazing,” she said. “Isn’t that the Orion constellation?”

Joe grinned at his wife of ten years. “How did I end up with such a brainy missus?”

“You fell in love with my arse, didn’t you? I don’t recall you looking at my brain when we met,” Carla teased him.

Dan chuckled, his eyes fixed on the leaping flames. “A pretty face isn’t everything. There’s a legend told round these parts about a man who won his heart’s desire by seeing past a woman’s looks.”

“Oh? Isn’t attraction based on what we look like?” Joe said, sceptical.

“Not for those who are wise,” replied Dan.

“What’s the story?” Carla asked, sitting up and leaning forward eagerly. Dan’s grey eyes narrowed against the glare of the firelight, and he began to speak.

“Long ago, a traveller was riding this land when he was set upon by robbers. As the blows hit his body, he feared he would die. But then, with screams of terror, the robbers fled as a shadowy figure armed with a staff began to rain blows on them, and a huge dog sank its jaws into their unprotected arms and legs. The traveller, whose name was Gareth, lifted his head to see a tall woman in a cloak. When she looked at him, he gasped. She was the ugliest woman he had ever seen, with a huge jaw, misshapen nose and sunken eyes, her skin puckered and marked.”

“I think there’s a moral coming here,” Joe murmured, and Carla jabbed her elbow into his ribs. Dan, unperturbed, continued.

“Gareth saw her eyes swivel away, and with an effort, he called out to her. She said nothing, but began to tend his wounds, gently and carefully. Afterwards, she washed her hands in a nearby spring and brought him water.

“Ashamed of his reaction to her appearance, Gareth offered his eternal thanks. She laughed, a harsh sound, and he winced.

‘Tell me your name,’ he said. She told him her name was Charis. ‘You saved my life. How can I repay you?’ There was a long silence before the woman fixed him with her eyes. They were clear, deep blue, and their loveliness, in the ravages of her face, surprised him.

‘You truly want to repay me?’ He nodded, trying to ignore the ugliness of her countenance. ‘Then I have one desire,’ she said. ‘Will you grant it in recompense for your life?’

‘Anything!’ he declared, feeling he owed her his life.

‘Marry me,’ she said, and his jaw dropped in dismay. Charis watched him carefully and just as he was about to refuse, he saw the intense pain in her amazing eyes. He recalled how brave she was, her courage and determination and her care for him, a stranger.

Before he realised, he had agreed.

A flash of joy crossed her features and then she nodded shortly. ‘You must rest a while and then we will seek a parson to marry us.’

Gareth went through the ceremony in a daze, barely believing that this woman, who was so ugly it defied description, was now his wife. He had sent a message home that he was married, but in his heart, he dreaded the reception Charis would receive. He knew his mother had wanted a happy marriage for him – but not to a woman who looked like Charis. He was troubled.

Charis said little on the ride and Gareth wondered what she was thinking. His heart sinking, he saw the flags and the townspeople lining the streets, cheering. As they drew near, the cheers died away and soon there was just the sound of their horses’ hooves ringing on the streets in the silence.”

Dan paused and took a swig of his coffee.

“Oh, do go on! What happened?” cried Carla. “I don’t know who I feel most for – poor Charis, or Gareth!”

Dan continued. “That night, Gareth’s family threw a feast as a celebration, but it was a tense, unhappy occasion. Charis gorged herself on food and cackled loudly. Gareth’s head began to ache. The food was tasteless and the lights of the hall too bright.

Finally, Charis stood and held out her hand. ‘Come and claim me as your wife, husband,’ she said loudly to Gareth and the whole room went silent. Without a word, Gareth took her hand and led her to his room. Neither spoke as they undressed.

‘Kiss me,’ Charis wheezed and Gareth, steeling himself, saw the terror in her eyes that he would reject her. She had saved him, risked her life to save his. He closed his eyes and kissed her. Then he swung away, not knowing what to do.

‘Gareth!’ said a soft sweet voice. ‘Gareth, look at me.’

He spun around and there stood the loveliest woman he had ever seen. His eyes darted around the room.

‘Where is my wife? Where is Charis? Who are you?’

Her laughter was like the tinkling of bells. ‘You ask about Charis before asking about me. I am Charis. I was bewitched by a sorcerer because I would not marry him. His curse ensured if I would not marry him, no-one else would.’

Gareth took her hands, and he thought fleetingly, that they had always been soft, he had just not noticed. ‘Have I broken the spell?’

She looked sad. ‘Alas no. I can only remain in my true form for half the day. The other half I will be the disfigured creature you met at first.’ She gazed at him. ‘So choose wisely. Can you bear to look on me in the light of day, when your family and friends gaze on me and despair for you? Or will I be a hag that disturbs your rest and who you cannot bear to touch?’

He was silent for a long time, and he could feel her tense as she waited. ‘But this is not my choice. You bear the curse, not I. What do you want?’

Her breath hitched in her throat, and she put her face in her hands, weeping. Gareth, alarmed, pulled her into his arms, feeling her slender body shake. When she quietened, she smiled tremulously at him.

‘By offering me the choice, you have released the spell! I am returned to my true form.’

Gareth kissed her again but said seriously to her. ‘You have so many beautiful things in your character, I could have loved you in time anyway. Your courage and bravery, your truthfulness and determination.’ She kissed him again.

The next morning, Gareth told the story to his family and the whole town celebrated with them. But while Gareth rejoiced in his lovely new wife, he never forgot her actions towards him, which shone as brightly as diamonds – and lasted longer in his mind than her beauty.”

Dan stopped and there was a pause, before Carla applauded. Thoughtfully, Joe took Carla’s hand.

“You know, I’d seen you first when you were nice to Jane in your class,” he said. “She was being bullied. You marched up to her and invited her to sit with you. Jane’s face lit up. I’ve never forgotten it. Then I looked at your arse.”

She smiled and then kissed him. “Good to know you think something else about me is beautiful. Because my arse won’t always be this perky.”

Dan chuckled and suggested they turn in. 

Sara Sartagne

https://sarasartagne.com

Sara Sartagne writes women’s fiction featuring brave women, often weaving love stories through the narrative. Her English Garden Romance series reflects her passion for gardening. The novellas are downloadable from her website. The Duality books combine contemporary and historical plots into award-winning standalone dual timelines. She lives in East Yorkshire, moving from London to a HUGE garden in 2019.

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Sunday, March 9, 2025

Book Sunday at #OurAuthorGang

 Today's recommendation

A sleuth mystery by Dawn Treacher

Extract from The Seeds Of Murder

Cedric was a village vicar until his wife packed a small case and left on the bus and didn’t return. There was gossip and speculation. The loss was hard for Cedric to bear. He took to gardening and writing but he soon discovered that lies grow thickly like weeds in a garden and the villagers had secrets of their own.

*** 

Dead heading the roses was always the first job of the day, Cedric’s early morning mug of tea balanced on the fence post beside him. The robin who followed him around the garden as if overseeing his progress, sat a few feet away, a worm wriggling in her beak. Each year the rose bush had grown stronger, its leaves a rich glossy green. Nimbly he snipped the dead blooms, dropping them one by one into his bucket. He’d followed the instructions for propagating a rose to the letter and had marvelled as the limp stick of rose grew roots and sprouted tiny shoots of new life. He’d chosen the spot in his new garden carefully, ensuring it had plenty of sun and room to spread. Now it had grown almost as large as the bush that had spawned its rebirth. He may not have been able to bring his wife’s favourite rose bush with him when he moved that bleak day in early March, but she would have been proud of what he’d achieved, not just in that corner of the garden, with its neat flower border alongside a manicured lawn, but in the multitude of tubs that erupted colour in the form of fuchsias and marigolds and early petunias.

Scarlett had been more supportive than he could have hoped and had even bought him an edging tool for his birthday.

“You should start a blog, Dad,” she’d joked, wheeling a barrow of ripe manure and tipping it over the base of the rose bush.

“Vicar turned gardener, you’d have all the housewives hooked.” Her pony tail of thick auburn hair glinted in the sunlight. Cedric looked away. From the back view, his daughter looked so much like Carolina as she’d looked then, the year took on the vicarage, with its garden so thick with nettles he’d doubted she’d ever tame it. But he’d been wrong to doubt her and indeed had learnt more than he dared to admit from her determination to build a garden from a wasteland loved by bees and thistles alike.

“I’ll set it up for you,” called Scarlett, abandoning the wheelbarrow and slumping herself down on the lawn, kicking off her boots to wriggle her toes. “You just need to provide the words, and we know how good you are with those.”

Cedric joined her, but blogging wasn’t his style at all. It was far too personal, intrusive, letting people comment on what he held dear, mock him for his failings; as insidious as ground elder under the bushes.

Vicar leaves parish under cloud of scandal

Cedric never did discover who the journalist had been talking to, but as with all local papers, gossip sold much better than news and even a vicar made the occasional enemy. He’d left such rumours behind him when he moved ten miles to a new village outside the parish boundaries. No, a blog was far too public and his garden was his and his alone. Amongst the flowers in summer and the fallen leaves in winter, he felt his wife was near in spirit if not in body.

Now, Cedric stood and looked at the pebbled drive which extended down the side of the small bungalow which he and Rubens called home. His new office, as that was what he’d decided to call it, would fit nicely just below the window of his bedroom. He’d be able to sit inside and look out upon the roses; hear the birds singing in the trees. And Scarlett had promised him the WIFI would reach and the whole thing could be plugged into the electrics. He could even make tea.

He heard the crunch on the drive, the sound of an engine stopping, followed by footsteps on the path. Stage one of his plan had arrived in the form of a shabby 1970’s Buccaneer caravan, rather green upon its roof, its windows yellowed in the sun but to him, it was perfect.

Scarlett took charge to dress that caravan as if it were a house in need of a makeover. She may have dropped out of college, claiming fashion design had no future and that lifestyle YouTubing was where all the money was, but she certainly had the flare and the skill. Using Carolina’s old sewing machine at full pelt, Scarlett had soon replaced the faded poppy upholstery on the sofa cushions with smart new green velvet covers and added thick curtains with a tweed finish at all the windows with cord curtain tie backs and matching tweed cushions.

“It’s masculine, yet chic,” she said, as she plumped the cushions and laid down a brown striped rug between the two sofas. She’d found a perfect high coffee table in a charity shop which would hold Cedric’s laptop and notebooks, painted all the cupboards a deep gloss maroon and even bought him a little whistling kettle for the stove top. “You’ll get your novel finished in no time in here,” she’d said, settling herself down on one of the sofas next to Rubens, who’d decided it was better than any armchair in the bungalow. He purred loudly in his sleep.

Yes, it would do nicely as a place to write, but though his manuscript, handwritten in a set of matching notebooks was sitting beside his laptop, that wasn’t exactly what he had in mind when he’d bought the caravan from a scrap dealer for a measly three hundred pounds. No, it was an office but not just any office. Now was not the moment to tell Scarlett, or anyone else for that matter. As Scarlett was intent on potting up some plants to decorate the gravel around the entrance to the caravan, Cedric settled down with a mug of tea and bourbon biscuit, notebook open and pen in hand. Rubens, who always took the opening of a notebook as a sign that he had to help out in the art of writing, stretched and then jumped up off the sofa cushion, leapt up onto the coffee table and sprawled out, one paw draped over the edge of Cedric’s work of the day before. Cedric gave the cat’s tummy a tickle and began writing.

“...Pushing open the door, Inspector Barnabus found himself in a room in which he doubted another single object could have been wedged onto the shelves which crowded the damp stained walls or  crammed into drawers so stuffed full several failed to close at all. It never failed to surprise him that no matter how heinous the crime or objectionable the perpetrator first appeared, inside each house he searched, hoping to find clues and blame, he found threads of a life, woven tightly together, portraying on the outside the normal existence of a blameless soul. Rooms full of memories and mementoes that the perpetrators never believed would one day be carefully sifted through, catalogued and photographed. This room was no different but as he removed each layer and veneer of deception, just maybe beneath he would find the tiniest fragment of a clue. And here, inside a drawer full of what would appear to be old utility bills and final reminders, was a ticket for a dry cleaners and a quick check on his phone confirmed his suspicions, that it wasn’t one from the city, not even the neighbouring town, but one two hundred miles away.”

It was late afternoon by the time Cedric put down his pen and closed his notebook. He started up his laptop and opened a file on the desktop. Rubens had long since decided his assistance was no longer required and had taken to the floor of the caravan where he’d begun the ritual of washing first his belly then in between his toes.

“Rubens,” said Cedric, typing now. “There’s more to searching for clues than looking in obvious places.” He proceeded to add to a list he’d been compiling in a file entitled: Finding the missing. Look for the mundane in hidden places.

Dawn Treacher

www.dawntreacher.com

Dawn Treacher is based in North Yorkshire, England. She writes in both adult crime fiction and children's middle grade fantasy adventures. She is also an illustrator of children's fiction, an artist and plush artist. She runs both a writing critique group and a creative writing group and goes into schools to promote storytelling.

Saturday, March 8, 2025

Author Lorraine Carey at #OurAuthorGang

 Meet the Author

Lorraine Carey

Lorraine Carey is a passionate storyteller, paranormal enthusiast, and seasoned author who has turned her real-life encounters with the unexplained into the heart of her fiction.

Having experienced many supernatural events firsthand, she masterfully infuses these eerie and mysterious elements into her novels, captivating readers with tales that blur the line between reality and the unknown.

Her love for travel has taken her to diverse locations, each steeped in unique histories and rich local legends. These journeys provide the perfect backdrop for her stories, weaving in authentic folklore and atmospheric settings that bring her narratives to life.

During her nine years in Grand Cayman with her husband, Lorraine found endless inspiration in the island’s history, culture, and enigmatic energy. Many of her books were born from this tropical paradise, where whispers of the past seemed to beckon her to pen these novels.

A dedicated educator and veteran Reading Specialist, Lorraine initially wrote for Young Adults, hoping to spark a love of reading in her students, who always delighted in her spine-chilling tales. Her YA novel, Jonathan’s Locket, was a finalist in the Wind Dancer Film Contest in 2014. Over the years, her literary portfolio has expanded to include fifteen self-published books, three co-authored works, and contributions to four anthologies as a member of the Golden Box Book Pub Writers team.

Now residing in St. Petersburg, Florida, Lorraine continues to write in retirement, drawing inspiration from her deep connection to the supernatural. Her empathic abilities ensure that the spirits never stray too far, fueling her passion for storytelling and keeping the ghostly whispers alive on the page.

Friday, March 7, 2025

A Magical Garden in the Making 1 #OurAuthorGang

The first steps of creating a garden

Right the way through growing up until leaving home to get married, our garden was always beautiful. Dad was a top-notch gardener, particularly with regard to his immaculate ‘bowling green’ lawns, both at the front and back of our house. Due to his expert lawn care, there was never a weed to be seen. They wouldn’t dare! The privet hedge was another focus for Dad’s exacting high standards and was always hand-trimmed using garden shears. Gorgeous, colourful flower borders framed the lawns – his pride and joy! Yes, delightful gardens indeed but to me…boring!

Throughout my married life, I was lucky to have some beautiful gardens, though they were created courtesy of a couple of husbands, not yours truly. When my last marriage broke up, I lived for three years in a third-floor apartment. It was a beautiful place that overlooked a river and stunning weir…but sadly, no garden; no wonderful outdoor space. I left there and did a house-share with a very dear friend – yes, it had a garden, but not one that I could call mine! After two and a half years with two hours of travelling time each day to get to work and back, it became extremely tiresome, so I returned to live in my hometown.

My new home is a much smaller house, but at least I have a small area of garden. The previous residents, needing a low maintenance garden for health reasons had had the previous garden dug up, a membrane laid and covered with slate chippings. (See picture number 1) I was delighted though, to have been left the sundial.

That same year when spring arrived I was determined to start work on the garden. It didn’t take me long to decide what I wanted to achieve. I had become Nana to three small granddaughters (then aged 4, 3 and 2 years old) and I intended my garden to be a source of magic and wonder for them as they grew.

My work started by clearing a good corner of the slate away. Once I’d cut the membrane underneath the patch, I dug it over in preparation and that small area was mind-numbing and a great deal of effort due to the compacted soil. My fairy house complete with its own tiny garden would take up the first little plot.

The removal of all the remaining slate chips and digging over of the garden would be too much of a mammoth task for me to cope with. My first husband, (dad to my son and daughter), is a very close friend these days and he kindly offered to take up the challenge. A few days later, the slate chips and the membrane were disposed of. He started all the digging the following week and boy, was I pleased I’d never attempted the work myself. The soil underneath was dry and heavily compacted. I could tell from the expressions on his face as the work progressed, he was finding the labour exhausting and a strain on his back. I’ll ever be grateful to him for the work he put into this.

Stepping stones, there had to be some stepping stones, so I visited the local garden centre and purchased some pretty wildlife ones. The hardstanding at the bottom left hand corner of the garden had obviously been the base for a shed at some point. I needed garden tools and at some stage I would require a ‘she shed’ to house them.

Picture 2 show the first stepping stones laid on the garden after it had all been dug over.

My visions were going to become reality. It would take some time, but I didn’t mind. A truly magical and colourful garden should be thought through, each careful stepping stone at a time.

Follow my future blogposts here as the magical garden takes shape!

Eva Bielby

https://www.evabielby.co.uk

Eva Bielby was born in North Yorkshire in the Northeast of England. She has spent over thirty years of her working life as a company accountant. Eva has a keen interest in spiritualism/mediumship and has attended several workshops to develop her skills further. During her quieter moments, Eva enjoys a cryptic crossword, sudoku, and gardening.

Wednesday, March 5, 2025

Video Day at #OurAuthorGang

 Lorraine reads a campfire story

When a camping trip goes wrong

A short story by Erika M Szabo, and read by Lorraine Carey


Listen to a chapter of the audiobook

Protected by the Falcon, narrated by Jannie Meisberger


Ilona is a doctor and is ruled by logic. When she starts to develop unusual powers, her beliefs change and she's thrown into a world of mysteries, traditions, and secrets. She doesn't know much about her heritage, besides legends and rituals, when she begins to remember her mother's instructions concealed as rhymes. The discovery of her healing power and ability to freeze time is exciting and frightening. A sinister man appears and Ilona connects his presence with the series of mysterious deaths around her. She has been in love with her unsuspecting best friend, when she meets a stranger. She is drawn to him and confused by the sudden magnetic feeling.

The Ancestors' Secret series is an epic fantasy, heroic romance series with magical powers, ancient legends, a love triangle, and time travel that is a great listen for fantasy lovers and also suitable for young adults.

Tuesday, March 4, 2025

Flash Fiction Challenge 5 at #OurAuthorGang

 Challenge accepted by Erika M Szabo

Howl of Grief

The alpha male howled mournfully into the vast, starlit night sky, his piercing blue eyes gleamed in the moonlight. His pack gathered closely behind him, their warm breaths forming fleeting clouds in the crisp, frigid air, yet he stood as an island of solitude, engulfed by his own deep sorrow. The loss of his beloved mate struck him with a gut-wrenching force, leaving an aching emptiness as if a vital piece of his very soul had been torn away.

She had been his equal in every facet of their wild existence, a formidable hunter and steadfast guardian of their pack. Her spirit matched the fierce winds that swept across their territory, unwavering and brave. But fate had dealt a cruel hand when a man in a drunken haze decided to go hunting.

He searched and stumbled with his loaded gun, ready to shoot anything that moved. He mumbled with a wide grin on his face, "A deer or rabbit for dinner would do, but a wolf fur coat for the wife... Now that would be something." He cackled, watching his unsteady steps. 

Suddenly, the man heard a threatening low growl that froze the breath in his throat as he looked up to face the wolfpack a few yards away. His hands shook in terror as he raised his rifle and pulled the trigger.

In a moment of selfless courage, the alpha female had thrown herself into the line of fire, sacrificing her life to ensure the safety of the others. The alpha male launched and tore the man’s throat out with one powerful bite. The man’s lifeless body slumped to the ground, but the wolf didn’t feel the satisfaction of revenge.

As he howled mournfully, the deep, resonant tones seemed to vibrate through the still night air, a somber lament that carried his grief far and wide. He could feel the palpable sympathy and understanding of his pack surrounding him like a comforting cocoon. Each of them had suffered the loss of wolves they held dear, but none had been as formidable, as integral, as his beloved mate. Her scent lingered in the cool night breeze, a whispering memory of what he had lost.

Even amidst the profound ache of his cries, he understood the necessity of fortitude for the sake of their pack. He would honor his mate's memory by leading them with the same unwavering courage and indomitable strength that she had so gracefully embodied. As his mournful howls echoed through the vast, star-studded sky, his pack joined in, their voices rising in a harmonious tribute to their fallen leader. It was a poignant reminder that she would forever be woven into the very fabric of their lives, an enduring presence in their hearts.

Erika M Szabo

https://authorerikamszabo.com

Erika loves to dance to her own tunes and follow her dreams, introducing her story-writing skills and her books that are based on creative imagination with themes such as magical realism, alternate history, urban fantasy, cozy mystery, sweet romance, and supernatural stories. Her children’s stories are informative and educational and deliver moral values in a non-preachy way.

Monday, March 3, 2025

Campfire Stories 9 at #OurAuthorGang

 A short story by David W. Thompson

Old Man Jenkins

My old gang and I always agreed that the best stories we’ve known always started in a circle around the flickering flames of a woodland campfire. As we got older, we assumed adult responsibilities like jobs and maintaining our homes. Over time, fishing and camping trips gravitated to changing diapers, soccer games, band recitals, and dance classes. You get the idea. Our outdoor adventures became few and far between, especially as a group. I’m not complaining.  I wouldn’t have had it any other way. But when Sam McDaniels called about an upcoming weekend campout, a bottle of Clorox couldn’t wipe the smile from my face!

My wife, Cathy, and my kids, Josh and Susan, dropped me off at our meeting place, The Olde Village Diner. After our tearful goodbyes, I threw my duffel bag in the back of Jack Dawson’s truck.

“I’ll be back Sunday night, guys. You’ll have a good time with Mommy at the movies. But don’t eat too much popcorn.”

“We promise, Daddy,” they assured me.

Cathy reached through the car window for a hug and goodbye kiss.

“You be safe, Dan. We will miss you. Be careful of bear…”

“There’s hardly any bears up there, and they are as scared of us as…”

“I meant your buddy, Bear Blake. He doesn’t have the best reputation since his divorce.”

“I’ll be good, Cathy. Promise.” I winked and went into the restaurant.

***

Bear jumped up from the table and yelled a greeting over the breakfast patrons’ heads.

“Dan Baker, well as I live and breathe. You ain't changed a bit, buddy. Not counting that gut, of course.” He threw a fake punch toward my midsection.

“Thanks, Bear. You seem to have grown a few pounds and lost a few hairs also.”

Sam McDaniels (Mac) and Jimmy Smith (Smitty) stood to shake my hand. Of the four of us, I was the only one in the “family way,” Smitty lost his wife in a car accident the year before. Mac and Bear were both divorced.

“It’s been too long, Dan,” Smitty said. “The waitress already took our order. We remembered you were a western omelet guy and ordered one for you. Hope that’s OK?”

I nodded. “So, what’s the plan? Are we headed for our usual spot?”

“We were just talking about that. Bear thinks we should camp on the river by the old sawmill. You remember the place?”

“C’mon, Mac. Not where that old hiker was killed five years back?”

“That’s the place, Dan, but it wasn’t the old man. Some freak killed his wife and kids while he was up on the mountain.” Bear said. “I don’t reckon he ever recovered, though. He died a short time later.”

They must have read something in my eyes.

“Don’t worry, Dan,” Smitty said. “That was years ago. I’m sure the culprit was caught. But you always were a Nervous Nellie.” They all laughed.

When we left the diner, I spotted a groundhog dead on the side of the road. It must have just happened, as it wasn’t there when Cathy dropped me off. But vultures had already discovered the grisly feast and fought among each other for the choicest entrails.

“Death sustains life,” Bear said.

***

The campsite was much as I remembered, although the brush was thicker, and the trails were less well-defined. Today’s youth didn’t keep it beaten down as we once did. There were no video games on the mountain or reception, either.

We were old hands at camp setup, and our skills weren’t as rusty as I feared. With our tents up, sleeping backs rolled out, and the campfire started, we tried our hand at fishing. We didn’t catch anything big enough—except to use for bait. We settled on hotdogs and beans over the fire.

“It’s been a while, guys. Anyone remember whose turn it is for the campfire story?” I asked.

Mac and Smitty turned toward Bear. The man’s eyes shone in the dim light of the crescent moon, and he hunched up his shoulders. His lips curled into a dark smile.

“Sure, I’ll go. I’ll piggyback off the old hiker story. It seems appropriate for where we are. As you know, my dad was the Sheriff then, and I guess I heard a little more about it than most folks.

“Mr. Jenkins was a sprightly old man. He was as narrow as a board but wiry, with thick, work-hardened hands like meat hooks. Dad said he could hold his own in a fight with any man. But he was a hot-tempered soul.  I never heard of him hurting his wife or kids, but the screaming matches coming out of that old cabin were the stuff of legends hereabouts.

“This particular night was no exception. It was so intense that folks clear on the other side of the holler claimed dishes rattled in their cupboards.”

An owl’s sudden: “Whoooo! Hooo! HooHoo!” broke the story’s spell. We looked up at the trees, and the great horned owl’s large yellow eyes glared back at us.

Bear picked up a stick we’d collected for the fire and tossed it at the large bird. It dropped from the tree and swooped low overhead. Its silent wings carried it to its next perch nearby, where it continued its haunting serenade.

“Why did you do that? Isn’t that bad luck?”

“No,” Mac said. “You are mixing up your old wives’ tales. It’s worse. Owls mean death is coming.”

“Now, who is the superstitious one?” I asked.

“Probably just smelled our hot dogs and hoped we’d share,” Bear said. “Still, it is interesting as that was the first thing old man Jenkins heard on his fateful night.”

I glanced at my cell phone, but it had no bars.

“See, old Jenkins,” Bear continued, “he enjoyed a little nip of moonshine now and again. But it didn’t much like him. I don’t know what the cause of the ruckus was that evening, but you can be sure some “corn squeezings” were at the root of the trouble.

“Misses Jenkins, the sweetest lady there ever was, by all accounts, had enough of the old man’s shenanigans. She told him to get out and stay out. Jenkins never knew what was good for him, so he headed up the mountain, bottle in hand. He tried sleeping it off in the old mill but said an owl wouldn’t shut up. Kept him awake most of the night. He passed out in the wee hours only to have a flock of ravens wake him at dawn.

“Jenkins told my dad he knew something wasn’t right. He could feel it in his bones and raced home. The scene when he got there was beyond description. The blood began on the front steps. The floors and walls inside were covered with it. Dad said he’d never seen so much, even at community hog killings. I’d like to tell you they caught the murderer, but it never happened. My dad retired, but it’s the one case he never forgot.”   

I suspect we all had a restless sleep that night. My dreams were unnatural, dark, filled with haunted shadows, and too real by far. A shriek from the river jolted me awake. A woman’s scream of horror, only broken by moments of insane laughter. I slipped on my boots and crept towards the sound.

Peering from behind an old oak, I spied an old woman knee-deep in the water. Her gray hair was greasy and matted to her skeletal head. Her dress was of a style long out of fashion. What was left of it anyway, as it hung from her in tatters. She raised her face to the heavens and screeched again. The sound sent shivers down my back.  She was washing something in the river, and I stretched my neck to see. It was Cathy’s favorite dress—covered in blood! She turned towards me and cackled, then smiled with pointed yellow teeth. She raised one shriveled hand toward me, pointing at me with long, yellow fingernails.

“Death comes for us all,” she said. I woke in my sleeping bag, drenched in sweat.

***

I crawled out of my sleeping bag Sunday morning and saw Smitty had revived our campfire. An unkindness of ravens squawked in the trees around camp.

“I know,” Smitty said. “I wish those damn things would shut up. Got some venison sausage cooking if you want some. Did you sleep OK?”

“Did you hear anything at the river last night?”

“Like what? Was Bear up making growling noises like every camping trip?”

“No, more like an old woman screaming…”

Smitty shook his head.

“Guess it really was a dream then—well, a nightmare. It was an old woman dressed in rags who screamed so loud it hurt my ears, then laughed disturbingly, like you’d hear in an insane asylum.”

“Dreaming of banshees, are ya, Dan? Another portent of death—you read too many horror novels, my friend. I’ll bet my ex-wife has a few romance novels you can borrow.”

His joke did nothing to relieve my anxiety. Still, the sausage was delicious, even if the fishing was poor. Otherwise, our day was uneventful.

A heavy fog settled over the camp well before sundown. The woodland came alive with the sounds of night birds and coyotes fooled by the early darkness. As we packed up camp, a swarm of bats flew overhead.

As I tossed my pack in the truck bed, my phone rang. It was Cathy’s number.

“Daddy? Help us. Please! We need you…”

“Susan? What’s wrong, honey?” but the line went dead before she could answer.

***

I’ll give Bear credit; he could fly down mountain roads. The boys tried to reassure me, but the concern written in their eyes betrayed their true feelings.

The four of us rushed toward the house like an avenging army.

The front step was covered in a thick red liquid, and tears sprung from my eyes. I followed its trail to the kitchen, then ran up the stairs, screaming each of my loved ones' names in turn.

“Cathy? Josh? Susan? Where are you?”

“Dan, come quick. Down here,” Mac yelled.

I raced back down the steps, tripping over the section of loose carpet Cathy had been after me to fix, but catching myself before I fell.

My three friends stood at the kitchen window,

“There’s a light. I can’t make anything out, but there’s movement too,” Bear said.

I grabbed a baseball bat from the hall closet and hurried out to save my family!

***

Halfway to the flickering light source, a flashlight beam hit me in the eyes and blinded me.

“Daddy! Daddy! You came to save us!” Susan squealed.

“Mommy figured it out, Daddy,” Josh said. “She said that damn tent is worthless.”

“Let’s not use words like that, Josh. Mommy was upset,” Cathy said. “Welcome home, Dan. The kiddos wanted to go camping just like their Daddy.”

“We had s’mores,” Susan added.

“But the blood? It’s all over the steps and on the floor. Who was hurt?”

Cathy frowned, and her lips pinched together. “Hmm, I’m not sure, but I can make an educated guess.  Josh decided that strawberry syrup would go perfectly with s’mores. I guess it got away from you, huh, Josh?”

Josh ducked his head, “I’m sorry, Mommy. I meant to clean it up.”

Bear, Mac, and Smitty left laughing with another story to tell.

I can’t predict the future; maybe I’ll go camping again—someday. But no time soon.

David W. Thompson

https://www.david-w-thompson.com

David is a multiple award-winning author, Army veteran, and graduate of UMUC. He’s a multi-genre writer and a member of the Horror Writers’ Association, and the Science Fiction & Fantasy Writers Association. When not writing, Dave enjoys family, kayaking, fishing, hiking, hunting, winemaking, and woodcarving.

Sunday, March 2, 2025

Book Sunday #OurAuthorGang

 Today's recommendation

Cozy small-town mystery

Mysterious things happen in small towns.
When Danielle finally quits her boring accountant job and opens an Antiques & Stuff store, her life changes for the better. But soon happy life starts to spin out of
control when the snobbish new owner of the Couture mansion brings a seemingly worthless painting into Danielle’s shop. The ownership of the painting is questionable, and the town’s future is threatened by the plans of the ruthless, rich owner who wants to build a leather factory on the estate, too close to town.
An unexpected visitor arrives, and he may possess the much-needed solution to everyone’s problems in this quaint little town.

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Danielle fell asleep as soon as her head hit the pillow. In her jumbled dream, she was running in a dense forest and her shoes kept sticking in mud slowing her down. She tried to scream but couldn’t make a sound. Someone or something was chasing her, and she knew she had to get away. Suddenly, a beautiful man appeared and embraced her. She felt the warmth of the sun on her face and all her fears disappeared. She held onto his strong arms and looked into his passionate eyes. He started talking in a soft voice and Danielle struggled to hear his words but couldn’t. He caressed her shoulder and when their lips met in a sensuous kiss, she felt a pleasant tingle deep inside her body.

A sudden crashing sound yanked her out of the sweet dream. ‘Bloody Hell’ she heard a man’s muffled voice. What the— someone’s in the store! Fear coursed through Danielle as she stood up and reached for the handgun she kept by the couch, just in case. She felt safer when she occasionally slept in the store after a long day.

Gun in hand, she tiptoed from the backroom and turned the light on. “I have a gun, and I’m a good shot,” she warned, cocking the gun, trying to sound confident.

“Don’t shoot!” The man yelled and Danielle saw him running toward the door. He yanked the door open and heard his footsteps as he was running down the street. A minute later she heard a car engine and then the car speeding away.

Danielle took a deep breath and put the gun on the counter. Her hands were shaking as she dialed the police. “A man broke into my store! He’s gone but I’m afraid he might come back!” she cried.

“The dispatcher instructed her in a calming voice, “Hide in a room where you can lock the door. I’m sending a patrol car right away.”

Danielle was afraid to stay alone and called Sarah. Her best friend didn’t need a long explanation. “I’ll be there in a minute, don’t hang up,” she said, in a sleepy voice and Danielle heard the jingle of keys and Sarah starting her car engine a few seconds later.

The police car arrived at the same time as Sarah’s car screeched to a halt in front of the store. She jumped out and ran into the store barefoot, still in her pajamas. “Are you okay?” she cried out running to Danielle and hugged her.

“I’m fine,” Danielle assured her and looking at the two officers entering the store with guns in hand, continued. “He ran out of the store when I put the lights on, and I heard him driving away.”

“Did you see his face?” the taller officer asked, putting his gun in the holster.

“No, he stood here in front of the counter,” Danielle recalled. “But he turned his back to me so fast that I couldn’t see his face. All I saw was his dark overcoat, and he had gray, neatly trimmed hair.”

“Please look around to see if anything is missing.”

Danielle scanned the shelves and looked at the register. “Nothing seems to be missing.”

“The lock is busted,” the officer observed. “We’ll park in front of the store for a while. I advise you to go home.”

“No, I want to stay here,” Danielle replied. “I’ll call the locksmith in the morning.”

“Then I’m staying with you.” Sarah decided.

“I have spare clothes in the backroom. Go, change.”

“Okay.” Sarah turned and walked by the counter suddenly becoming upset. “Put that gun away, Danielle! I hate guns.”

“I will, don’t worry.” Danielle smiled and put the gun on the shelf under the counter.

After the officers walked out to the patrol car, Danielle closed the door behind them and secured a sturdy chair under the doorknob to hold the door closed. She left the lights on and legs still shaky, walked to the backroom to make coffee.

“Who could it be and what did he want?” Sarah questioned, putting the sweater on she found in the closet.

Danielle spooned the coffee into the filter and filled the machine with water. “I have no idea. Nothing is worth a lot of money in the store.”

Sarah cocked her head and pulled her thick, curly hair into a ponytail with a scrunchie. “Maybe he thought he’d find cash, or perhaps he knew exactly what he wanted.”

“He didn’t seem like a bum or addict who would steal anything to get his next fix. He looked well-groomed and wore Italian loafers. I recognized it because the lawyer down the street wears those kinds of shoes and he makes sure everyone knows that they’re Italian leather.”

“Yeah, he’s a pompous fool.” Sarah giggled and then her voice changed to a serious tone. “But if this man wasn’t just an average burglar who steals anything, he could get his hands on and wanted something specific, why didn’t he just come to the store and buy it?”

“I have no idea. I’m sorry I woke you up, but I was really scared. Thank you for coming over so fast, even in your PJs,” Danielle hugged Sarah.

“Of course, what are besties for?” Sarah patted Danielle’s back.

“I’m too wired to sleep, but you need rest. You’re working today, right? It’s 2 a.m. so you can still sleep for a few hours.”

“Nope, I’m off today, and I’m not going anywhere until I know you’re safe.”

Danielle held up the coffee pot. “Do you want some?”

“No, it always gives me heartburn in the middle of the night. Why don’t you lie down to sleep a little? I’ll stay up.”

Danielle filled her cup. “I’m too wired to sleep. I’m going to paint for a while.”

“Okay, then I’ll rest my eyes on that comfy couch.” Sarah yawned.

Danielle walked to her painting corner and after taking the cover off the half-done painting, she changed her mind. I’m going to clean the portrait of the Musketeer. Let’s see what’s hiding under that new coat of paint.

***

Danielle heard a knock on the window and looked up startled. She saw Mr. Jones straining to peek into the store through the window. Sitting on her stool in front of the easel with a brush in hand, she glanced at the clock. Oh, my! Is it nine o’clock already? She stood up and hurried to the front door. Pulling the chair from under the doorknob, she opened the door.

“Thank God you’re okay!” Mr. Jones pushed through the half-open door and hugged her. “I just heard from the butcher. Do you know who it was? Did they take anything? Did they try to hurt you? Why were you in the store so late?” his questions came as he was trying to catch his breath.

“I’m fine,” Danielle assured the worried mailman, smiling. “I haven’t the faintest idea who it was and what he wanted. He ran away when I yelled out and cocked my gun.”

“Oh, good! You should’ve shot him in the leg. He deserved it.”

“I don’t think he’s from around here,” Danielle speculated. “Only the lawyer down the street wears that brand of expensive loafers.”

“You don’t think…”

“No, he has brown hair and the burglar had silvery gray hair.”

“Now wait a minute!” the mailman grabbed Danielle’s arm in his excitement. “I might have seen that man at the Couture mansion. Mrs. Van Bramer’s secretary said he’s an art expert.”

“What’s going on?” Danielle heard Sarah’s sleepy voice behind her. “Oh, good morning Mr. Jones.”

“Mr. Jones just told me he saw the man who broke into the store,” Danielle explained to her best friend.

The mailman yanked his carrier bag higher on his shoulder. “I’ll stop at the police station and report this.” He started walking away but turned back. “Oh, I almost forgot. The bakery is open. Lucy’s niece had a baby boy. I got you fresh croissants.” He smiled and handed a paper bag to Danielle.

“Thank you, Mr. Jones! It was very nice of you,” Danielle called after the mailman as he hurried away down the sidewalk, and then turned to Sarah. “You’re not going to believe what I’ve found! Come, let me show you.” She reached for Sarah’s hand and led her to the corner in the store.

“Phew, it smells like turpentine over here.” Sarah crinkled her nose.

“I’ve been working on taking off the new layer of paint and now the signature of the artist is visible. He was a much sought-after painter in 17th century France.”

“Let’s search it,” Sarah perked up. “Maybe this painting is worth a lot of money!”

“I’ll boot up the computer, but first, I’m going to call the locksmith. While the computer is warming up, we’ll eat the croissants Mr. Jones brought.” Danielle decided and covered the painting.

“Your ancient computer takes forever. You have to get a new one.”

“I know.” Danielle sighed. “I never had the money for it, but after the surge of customers, now I do.”

The locksmith said he’ll stop by before lunch and by the time the women finished breakfast, the ancient computer was ready for search. Danielle Googled the name of the artist and her jaw dropped when she clicked on the first website which popped up on her screen.

Sarah peeked over Danielle’s shoulder. “What? No way!” she shrieked and read the headline out loud. “The portrait of a noblewoman of the famous 17th century artist was sold to a well know American art collector for ten million dollars.”

Danielle, not believing her eyes, backspaced and clicked on the next link. It was the auction website where the price of the painting was confirmed. She kept searching and found fifteen more paintings from the same artist that had been sold for similar amounts in the past ten years. “I have to tell Mrs. Van Bramer about this. She gave me the painting not knowing the possible value of it.”

“Wait a minute!” Sarah exclaimed. “What if that so-called expert knew the value of the painting and lied to Mrs. Van Bramer? I think he broke into the store. And what if she wants the painting back after she finds out how much it’s worth?”

“I’ll give it back to her, of course. She bought the house and found the painting in the hidden room; it belongs to her.”

“Nah-uh!” Sarah announced. “That’s not right. It belongs to the Couture family. I bet the old lady didn’t tell her relatives about the hidden room.”

“Or, maybe she didn’t even know about it. But you’re right; it had to be a member of the family who hid the painting in the secret room. It belongs to them. I’m going to finish cleaning the signature part to be sure, and then I’ll call Mrs. Van Bramer.”

“Sounds like a plan.” Sarah decided. “I’m gonna go home to change but I’ll come back around one o’clock to bring you lunch.”

CONTINUE READING


Erika M Szabo

https://authorerikamszabo.com

Erika loves to dance to her own tunes and follow her dreams, introducing her story-writing skills and her books that are based on creative imagination with themes such as magical realism, alternate history, urban fantasy, cozy mystery, sweet romance, and supernatural stories. Her children’s stories are informative and educational and deliver moral values in a non-preachy way.

Saturday, March 1, 2025

Poetry Day at #OurAuthorGang

 A poem by David W. Thompson

We’ll Remember

 

You left us way too early.

No time would be enough.

Still, time heals all, or so I’m told

But if the years do dull the pain

What then of the memories?

Will past joys, too, slip from sight?

 

Will my mind’s eye distort your visage

‘Til only faded photos remain?

Will your voices not whisper in the wind?

Soothing my fears, answering my prayers?

Will the taste of a freshly picked tomato

Not recall the loving labor of your hands?

 

For I’d bear this grief with a smile,

Pray the lash cut even deeper,

To never forget your names

To not know a day without you…

 

I saw your dreams forgotten.

While making our dreams come true

You did so forever smiling

Could it be that they were the same?

 

But my grief makes me selfish

For I knew you oh so long.

Others have missed you deeply

And now your pain is gone.

 

I know you’ll always be watching

To guide, to comfort, to cheer.

I know you’ll not be lonely

With so many in your arms.

 

But know this heart is empty.

Until I am too reborn.

 

And we won’t forget

Love you, Mom and Dad.


David W. Thompson

https://www.david-w-thompson.com

David is a multiple award-winning author, Army veteran, and graduate of UMUC. He’s a multi-genre writer and a member of the Horror Writers’ Association, and the Science Fiction & Fantasy Writers Association. When not writing, Dave enjoys family, kayaking, fishing, hiking, hunting, winemaking, and woodcarving.