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Danielle fell asleep as soon as her head hit the pillow. In her
jumbled dream, she was running in a dense forest and her shoes kept sticking in
mud slowing her down. She tried to scream but couldn’t make a sound. Someone or
something was chasing her, and she knew she had to get away. Suddenly, a
beautiful man appeared and embraced her. She felt the warmth of the sun on her
face and all her fears disappeared. She held onto his strong arms and looked
into his passionate eyes. He started talking in a soft voice and Danielle
struggled to hear his words but couldn’t. He caressed her shoulder and when
their lips met in a sensuous kiss, she felt a pleasant tingle deep inside her body.
A sudden crashing sound yanked her out of the sweet dream.
‘Bloody Hell’ she heard a man’s muffled voice. What the— someone’s in the
store! Fear coursed through Danielle as she stood up and reached for the handgun
she kept by the couch, just in case. She felt safer when she occasionally slept
in the store after a long day.
Gun in hand, she tiptoed from the backroom and turned the
light on. “I have a gun, and I’m a good shot,” she warned, cocking the gun,
trying to sound confident.
“Don’t shoot!” The man yelled and Danielle saw him running
toward the door. He yanked the door open and heard his footsteps as he was
running down the street. A minute later she heard a car engine and then the car
speeding away.
Danielle took a deep breath and put the gun on the counter.
Her hands were shaking as she dialed the police. “A man broke into my store! He’s
gone but I’m afraid he might come back!” she cried.
“The dispatcher instructed her in a calming voice, “Hide in a
room where you can lock the door. I’m sending a patrol car right away.”
Danielle was afraid to stay alone and called Sarah. Her best
friend didn’t need a long explanation. “I’ll be there in a minute, don’t hang
up,” she said, in a sleepy voice and Danielle heard the jingle of keys and Sarah
starting her car engine a few seconds later.
The police car arrived at the same time as Sarah’s car
screeched to a halt in front of the store. She jumped out and ran into the
store barefoot, still in her pajamas. “Are you okay?” she cried out running to
Danielle and hugged her.
“I’m fine,” Danielle assured her and looking at the two officers
entering the store with guns in hand, continued. “He ran out of the store when
I put the lights on, and I heard him driving away.”
“Did you see his face?” the taller officer asked, putting
his gun in the holster.
“No, he stood here in front of the counter,” Danielle
recalled. “But he turned his back to me so fast that I couldn’t see his face.
All I saw was his dark overcoat, and he had gray, neatly trimmed hair.”
“Please look around to see if anything is missing.”
Danielle scanned the shelves and looked at the register.
“Nothing seems to be missing.”
“The lock is busted,” the officer observed. “We’ll park in
front of the store for a while. I advise you to go home.”
“No, I want to stay here,” Danielle replied. “I’ll call the
locksmith in the morning.”
“Then I’m staying with you.” Sarah decided.
“I have spare clothes in the backroom. Go, change.”
“Okay.” Sarah turned and walked by the counter suddenly
becoming upset. “Put that gun away, Danielle! I hate guns.”
“I will, don’t worry.” Danielle smiled and put the gun on
the shelf under the counter.
After the officers walked out to the patrol car, Danielle
closed the door behind them and secured a sturdy chair under the doorknob to
hold the door closed. She left the lights on and legs still shaky, walked to
the backroom to make coffee.
“Who could it be and what did he want?” Sarah questioned, putting
the sweater on she found in the closet.
Danielle spooned the coffee into the filter and filled the
machine with water. “I have no idea. Nothing is worth a lot of money in the
store.”
Sarah cocked her head and pulled her thick, curly hair into
a ponytail with a scrunchie. “Maybe he thought he’d find cash, or perhaps he
knew exactly what he wanted.”
“He didn’t seem like a bum or addict who would steal
anything to get his next fix. He looked well-groomed and wore Italian loafers.
I recognized it because the lawyer down the street wears those kinds of shoes
and he makes sure everyone knows that they’re Italian leather.”
“Yeah, he’s a pompous fool.” Sarah giggled and then her
voice changed to a serious tone. “But if this man wasn’t just an average
burglar who steals anything, he could get his hands on and wanted something
specific, why didn’t he just come to the store and buy it?”
“I have no idea. I’m sorry I woke you up, but I was really
scared. Thank you for coming over so fast, even in your PJs,” Danielle hugged
Sarah.
“Of course, what are besties for?” Sarah patted Danielle’s
back.
“I’m too wired to sleep, but you need rest. You’re working
today, right? It’s 2 a.m. so you can still sleep for a few hours.”
“Nope, I’m off today, and I’m not going anywhere until I
know you’re safe.”
Danielle held up the coffee pot. “Do you want some?”
“No, it always gives me heartburn in the middle of the
night. Why don’t you lie down to sleep a little? I’ll stay up.”
Danielle filled her cup. “I’m too wired to sleep. I’m going
to paint for a while.”
“Okay, then I’ll rest my eyes on that comfy couch.” Sarah
yawned.
Danielle walked to her painting corner and after taking the cover off the half-done painting, she changed her mind. I’m going to clean the portrait of the Musketeer. Let’s see what’s hiding under that new coat of paint.
***
Danielle heard a knock on the window and looked up startled.
She saw Mr. Jones straining to peek into the store through the window. Sitting
on her stool in front of the easel with a brush in hand, she glanced at the
clock. Oh, my! Is it nine o’clock already? She stood up and hurried to
the front door. Pulling the chair from under the doorknob, she opened the door.
“Thank God you’re okay!” Mr. Jones pushed through the half-open
door and hugged her. “I just heard from the butcher. Do you know who it was?
Did they take anything? Did they try to hurt you? Why were you in the store so
late?” his questions came as he was trying to catch his breath.
“I’m fine,” Danielle assured the worried mailman, smiling.
“I haven’t the faintest idea who it was and what he wanted. He ran away when I
yelled out and cocked my gun.”
“Oh, good! You should’ve shot him in the leg. He deserved
it.”
“I don’t think he’s from around here,” Danielle speculated.
“Only the lawyer down the street wears that brand of expensive loafers.”
“You don’t think…”
“No, he has brown hair and the burglar had silvery gray
hair.”
“Now wait a minute!” the mailman grabbed Danielle’s arm in
his excitement. “I might have seen that man at the Couture mansion. Mrs. Van
Bramer’s secretary said he’s an art expert.”
“What’s going on?” Danielle heard Sarah’s sleepy voice
behind her. “Oh, good morning Mr. Jones.”
“Mr. Jones just told me he saw the man who broke into the
store,” Danielle explained to her best friend.
The mailman yanked his carrier bag higher on his shoulder.
“I’ll stop at the police station and report this.” He started walking away but turned
back. “Oh, I almost forgot. The bakery is open. Lucy’s niece had a baby boy. I
got you fresh croissants.” He smiled and handed a paper bag to Danielle.
“Thank you, Mr. Jones! It was very nice of you,” Danielle called
after the mailman as he hurried away down the sidewalk, and then turned to
Sarah. “You’re not going to believe what I’ve found! Come, let me show you.”
She reached for Sarah’s hand and led her to the corner in the store.
“Phew, it smells like turpentine over here.” Sarah crinkled
her nose.
“I’ve been working on taking off the new layer of paint and
now the signature of the artist is visible. He was a much sought-after painter
in 17th century France.”
“Let’s search it,” Sarah perked up. “Maybe this painting is
worth a lot of money!”
“I’ll boot up the computer, but first, I’m going to call the
locksmith. While the computer is warming up, we’ll eat the croissants Mr. Jones
brought.” Danielle decided and covered the painting.
“Your ancient computer takes forever. You have to get a new
one.”
“I know.” Danielle sighed. “I never had the money for it,
but after the surge of customers, now I do.”
The locksmith said he’ll stop by before lunch and by the
time the women finished breakfast, the ancient computer was ready for search.
Danielle Googled the name of the artist and her jaw dropped when she clicked on
the first website which popped up on her screen.
Sarah peeked over Danielle’s shoulder. “What? No way!” she
shrieked and read the headline out loud. “The portrait of a noblewoman of the
famous 17th century artist was sold to a well know American art
collector for ten million dollars.”
Danielle, not believing her eyes, backspaced and clicked on
the next link. It was the auction website where the price of the painting was
confirmed. She kept searching and found fifteen more paintings from the same
artist that had been sold for similar amounts in the past ten years. “I have to
tell Mrs. Van Bramer about this. She gave me the painting not knowing the
possible value of it.”
“Wait a minute!” Sarah exclaimed. “What if that so-called
expert knew the value of the painting and lied to Mrs. Van Bramer? I think he
broke into the store. And what if she wants the painting back after she finds
out how much it’s worth?”
“I’ll give it back to her, of course. She bought the house
and found the painting in the hidden room; it belongs to her.”
“Nah-uh!” Sarah announced. “That’s not right. It belongs to
the Couture family. I bet the old lady didn’t tell her relatives about the
hidden room.”
“Or, maybe she didn’t even know about it. But you’re right;
it had to be a member of the family who hid the painting in the secret room. It
belongs to them. I’m going to finish cleaning the signature part to be sure,
and then I’ll call Mrs. Van Bramer.”
“Sounds like a plan.” Sarah decided. “I’m gonna go home to
change but I’ll come back around one o’clock to bring you lunch.”
Erika M Szabo
Erika loves to dance to her own tunes and follow her dreams, introducing her story-writing skills and her books that are based on creative imagination with themes such as magical realism, alternate history, urban fantasy, cozy mystery, sweet romance, and supernatural stories. Her children’s stories are informative and educational and deliver moral values in a non-preachy way.
I love writing cozy mysteries where anything can happen but no bloody fights or cruelty. However, I explore the darker side of human nature.
ReplyDeleteI remember reading this story as it revolved around art theft, which has always fascinated me. Great writing as well.
ReplyDeleteOh, there's a lot more there than just a mysterious painting :)
DeleteWhat a great start for a mystery. The hidden painting makes it a mystery within a mystery. Well done, Lorraine!
ReplyDeleteSorry! Erika- I love it! I'll be reading this one,
DeleteHaha! Nope, it's not written by Lorraine, it's written by me :)
DeleteLovely excerpt there, Erika. And hit a nerve (sort of) as my daughter is called Danielle and her best friend is Sarah!
ReplyDeleteWhat a coincident! I love both names :)
DeleteI like it Erika, I’ve always wanted to find a piece of hidden art. I particularly like that Danielle is not squeamish about protecting herself.
ReplyDeleteThere's a lot more to that "worthless" painting :) And yes, Danielle is an honest, strong woman.
DeleteI love a cosy mystery and a good art theft too. Fabulous start to a story. - comment by Dawn
ReplyDeleteThank you Dawn :)
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