Showing posts with label Dawn Treacher. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Dawn Treacher. Show all posts

Monday, March 17, 2025

Campfire Stories 11 at #OurAuthorGang

 The Moon Bears Witness by Dawn Treacher

The rucksack was far heavier than she'd anticipated, the air fare exceeded her budget, just, but Frances had already booked time off work, boasted about it to her friends and bought a full colour guidebook.

It was happening and she wasn't going to let her niggling lack of confidence stop her this time, nor the reservations of her work colleague.

"You're seriously going hiking with someone you met online?"

"It's not like that, Tasmin, it's a reputable guide, with fellow hikers."

"But it's off grid, right, as in, wild camping, carrying your own water, no toilet, that kind of off grid?"

"Look, Tasmin, I'll be thirty next month and I haven't even been on holiday abroad, not once. You know what I said about this year, it's time to stretch those horizons, seek out new experiences."

"Yes, I get that, but I was thinking along the lines of trying the new Malaysian restaurant, enrolling in a language course, looking for a better job, not using behind a bush for a toilet in front of strangers and making one pair of knickers last three days.”

Frances couldn’t wait to tell Tasmin just how wrong she’d been. Having arrived in her destination, they’d been walking three days. She’d been expecting to meet the guide, Anya, plus two more hikers but when she got off the plane there was only Anya to meet her. Her fellow would be hikers had cried off; a medical emergency, a family funeral. Those things happen. But immediately Frances took a liking to Anya. Her appearance was striking, her enthusiasm contagious. After only a hour’s hiking across the windswept landscape, the air hot and dry, Frances had easily forgotten the fresh blisters that formed, the weight of her pack, the insects which bit her exposed arms.

On their third evening, Anya chose a site next to a deep blue lake.

“We’ll set camp here”, she said. “Make a fire.”

Frances had surprised herself by quickly picking up skills she’d never dreamed of, collecting wood, getting a campfire to spark, and nurturing the flames. The smell of smoke heralded the chance to massage her feet, absorb the stillness of the air, enjoy the rugged landscape of boulders, the fragrant spruce, the water before her a pool of the deepest blues. But most of all, Frances relished listening to Anya, who would talk until the moon was their light, the air filled with the sounds of the night. Frances had never sat by a campfire before; she loved the smell of it, the sound, the sound of Anya’s voice, deep and rich at times, haunting. The light of the fire warmed the colour of Anya’s skin. Anya’s tales had been of her adventures, the people she’d met, the legends which ran through the regions like seams of precious metal through rock. Like a small child listening to a mother, Frances had been entranced by her words, words which brought alive places she’d never been, people that seemed so real they could have been sitting with them, sharing the hot tea they’d brewed, laughing together. But that evening something had shifted, in the way Anya had moved closer to the fire letting the heat of its flames glow on her face, glint in her eyes. Her voice took on an edge of chill which made the skin on Frances’ arms inadvertently shiver.

“They say the water here holds a secret,” said Anya, sitting crossed legged beside the fire, her eyes never leaving those of Frances.

“What kind of secret?”

“The water bears the souls of the dead.”

Frances shifted her position on the ground. “You mean, someone died here?”

Anya looked out across the water. She picked up a small stone that sat near her feet and skimmed it across the lake; it skipped several times before disappearing into the inky depths.

“Not everyone who has walked this land leaves it. It is said the souls of three campers remain here .The missing are not always found.”

“What happened to them?” asked Frances.

“Their stories have never been told,” said Anya “But their absence is still felt, appeals from

their families still ardent, despite the years which have passed.”

Something moved in the shadows beside them. A wisp of cloud moved across the face of the moon.

“But you shouldn’t fear the wilds,” continued Anya. “We are born from the earth, we encompass it, we are part of it and one day we will return to it.”

She eased another log in place. A new spark ignited, a flare in the dark. The shadows deepened across the lake. A cry of an animal rang out, its echo blown across the water. A larger drift of cloud shrouded the moon. Frances wrapped a small blanket around her shoulders.

“Do you know who these campers were?” asked Frances.

“I’ve heard their names. They weren’t much older than you. They came seeking adventure. But some adventurers are misguided. I believe the youngest made the mistake of coming alone.”

An uneasiness tingled in Frances’ legs, rising up into her whole being. “Are you saying they may be around somewhere?”

“They were reported to have walked these mountains, these hills, trodden the ground we walked today, yes. They too looked at these waters, smelt this air. These rocks heard their voices, that moon looked down upon their faces. This land knows their stories.”

“But haven’t they been looked for, has this area been searched?” asked Frances, staring into the lake before her.

“Why of course. But no trace was found. Rain cleanses the rocks, time erodes details.”

“But what about the lake?” Frances tucked the blanket up around her chin and shifted a little further from the water’s edge.

“Oh, the lake will never give up its secrets. Its waters run deep, too deep. This place is too remote. You know yourself the gradient you’ve climbed, the twists of the paths, the density of the trees, in places so close there is barely air between them to breathe. No, the water will hold their souls, their truth.

Anya inched nearer to where Frances huddled. Her mind flew to Tasmin, their banter about wild camping. Frances wished she’d stuck to learning a foreign language. The very ground beneath her seamed to tremble.

“Do you really believe their bodies are in this lake?” Frances’ words seemed to shiver as they left her lips.

“I know they are,” said Anya. “But don’t worry, I see fear in your eyes. I am your guide. I know this place better than anyone. I’ve swam in these waters, slept peacefully beside it. Listened to its sounds, its whispers.”

Frances relaxed her shoulders a little. The fire released a spark as Anya poked it. The embers glowed white with heat.

“Soon you will be joining them. You will become part of their story, part of the richness of this land.”

Anya leaned closer still. “But don’t worry, the water will hold you close, hold your secret closer still. No one will hear you. Only the rocks. Only the moon will bear witness and I will never tell.”

Only Anya heard Frances scream. The clouds slipped in front of the moon and the surface of the waters shivered.

Dawn Treacher

www.dawntreacher.com

Dawn Treacher is based in North Yorkshire, England. She writes in both adult crime fiction and children's middle grade fantasy adventures. She is also an illustrator of children's fiction, an artist and plush artist. She runs both a writing critique group and a creative writing group and goes into schools to promote storytelling.


Sunday, March 9, 2025

Book Sunday at #OurAuthorGang

 Today's recommendation

A sleuth mystery by Dawn Treacher

Extract from The Seeds Of Murder

Cedric was a village vicar until his wife packed a small case and left on the bus and didn’t return. There was gossip and speculation. The loss was hard for Cedric to bear. He took to gardening and writing but he soon discovered that lies grow thickly like weeds in a garden and the villagers had secrets of their own.

*** 

Dead heading the roses was always the first job of the day, Cedric’s early morning mug of tea balanced on the fence post beside him. The robin who followed him around the garden as if overseeing his progress, sat a few feet away, a worm wriggling in her beak. Each year the rose bush had grown stronger, its leaves a rich glossy green. Nimbly he snipped the dead blooms, dropping them one by one into his bucket. He’d followed the instructions for propagating a rose to the letter and had marvelled as the limp stick of rose grew roots and sprouted tiny shoots of new life. He’d chosen the spot in his new garden carefully, ensuring it had plenty of sun and room to spread. Now it had grown almost as large as the bush that had spawned its rebirth. He may not have been able to bring his wife’s favourite rose bush with him when he moved that bleak day in early March, but she would have been proud of what he’d achieved, not just in that corner of the garden, with its neat flower border alongside a manicured lawn, but in the multitude of tubs that erupted colour in the form of fuchsias and marigolds and early petunias.

Scarlett had been more supportive than he could have hoped and had even bought him an edging tool for his birthday.

“You should start a blog, Dad,” she’d joked, wheeling a barrow of ripe manure and tipping it over the base of the rose bush.

“Vicar turned gardener, you’d have all the housewives hooked.” Her pony tail of thick auburn hair glinted in the sunlight. Cedric looked away. From the back view, his daughter looked so much like Carolina as she’d looked then, the year took on the vicarage, with its garden so thick with nettles he’d doubted she’d ever tame it. But he’d been wrong to doubt her and indeed had learnt more than he dared to admit from her determination to build a garden from a wasteland loved by bees and thistles alike.

“I’ll set it up for you,” called Scarlett, abandoning the wheelbarrow and slumping herself down on the lawn, kicking off her boots to wriggle her toes. “You just need to provide the words, and we know how good you are with those.”

Cedric joined her, but blogging wasn’t his style at all. It was far too personal, intrusive, letting people comment on what he held dear, mock him for his failings; as insidious as ground elder under the bushes.

Vicar leaves parish under cloud of scandal

Cedric never did discover who the journalist had been talking to, but as with all local papers, gossip sold much better than news and even a vicar made the occasional enemy. He’d left such rumours behind him when he moved ten miles to a new village outside the parish boundaries. No, a blog was far too public and his garden was his and his alone. Amongst the flowers in summer and the fallen leaves in winter, he felt his wife was near in spirit if not in body.

Now, Cedric stood and looked at the pebbled drive which extended down the side of the small bungalow which he and Rubens called home. His new office, as that was what he’d decided to call it, would fit nicely just below the window of his bedroom. He’d be able to sit inside and look out upon the roses; hear the birds singing in the trees. And Scarlett had promised him the WIFI would reach and the whole thing could be plugged into the electrics. He could even make tea.

He heard the crunch on the drive, the sound of an engine stopping, followed by footsteps on the path. Stage one of his plan had arrived in the form of a shabby 1970’s Buccaneer caravan, rather green upon its roof, its windows yellowed in the sun but to him, it was perfect.

Scarlett took charge to dress that caravan as if it were a house in need of a makeover. She may have dropped out of college, claiming fashion design had no future and that lifestyle YouTubing was where all the money was, but she certainly had the flare and the skill. Using Carolina’s old sewing machine at full pelt, Scarlett had soon replaced the faded poppy upholstery on the sofa cushions with smart new green velvet covers and added thick curtains with a tweed finish at all the windows with cord curtain tie backs and matching tweed cushions.

“It’s masculine, yet chic,” she said, as she plumped the cushions and laid down a brown striped rug between the two sofas. She’d found a perfect high coffee table in a charity shop which would hold Cedric’s laptop and notebooks, painted all the cupboards a deep gloss maroon and even bought him a little whistling kettle for the stove top. “You’ll get your novel finished in no time in here,” she’d said, settling herself down on one of the sofas next to Rubens, who’d decided it was better than any armchair in the bungalow. He purred loudly in his sleep.

Yes, it would do nicely as a place to write, but though his manuscript, handwritten in a set of matching notebooks was sitting beside his laptop, that wasn’t exactly what he had in mind when he’d bought the caravan from a scrap dealer for a measly three hundred pounds. No, it was an office but not just any office. Now was not the moment to tell Scarlett, or anyone else for that matter. As Scarlett was intent on potting up some plants to decorate the gravel around the entrance to the caravan, Cedric settled down with a mug of tea and bourbon biscuit, notebook open and pen in hand. Rubens, who always took the opening of a notebook as a sign that he had to help out in the art of writing, stretched and then jumped up off the sofa cushion, leapt up onto the coffee table and sprawled out, one paw draped over the edge of Cedric’s work of the day before. Cedric gave the cat’s tummy a tickle and began writing.

“...Pushing open the door, Inspector Barnabus found himself in a room in which he doubted another single object could have been wedged onto the shelves which crowded the damp stained walls or  crammed into drawers so stuffed full several failed to close at all. It never failed to surprise him that no matter how heinous the crime or objectionable the perpetrator first appeared, inside each house he searched, hoping to find clues and blame, he found threads of a life, woven tightly together, portraying on the outside the normal existence of a blameless soul. Rooms full of memories and mementoes that the perpetrators never believed would one day be carefully sifted through, catalogued and photographed. This room was no different but as he removed each layer and veneer of deception, just maybe beneath he would find the tiniest fragment of a clue. And here, inside a drawer full of what would appear to be old utility bills and final reminders, was a ticket for a dry cleaners and a quick check on his phone confirmed his suspicions, that it wasn’t one from the city, not even the neighbouring town, but one two hundred miles away.”

It was late afternoon by the time Cedric put down his pen and closed his notebook. He started up his laptop and opened a file on the desktop. Rubens had long since decided his assistance was no longer required and had taken to the floor of the caravan where he’d begun the ritual of washing first his belly then in between his toes.

“Rubens,” said Cedric, typing now. “There’s more to searching for clues than looking in obvious places.” He proceeded to add to a list he’d been compiling in a file entitled: Finding the missing. Look for the mundane in hidden places.

Dawn Treacher

www.dawntreacher.com

Dawn Treacher is based in North Yorkshire, England. She writes in both adult crime fiction and children's middle grade fantasy adventures. She is also an illustrator of children's fiction, an artist and plush artist. She runs both a writing critique group and a creative writing group and goes into schools to promote storytelling.

Thursday, February 27, 2025

The Song of #OurAuthorGang

 What is #OurAuthorGang?

#OurAuthorGang is a diverse group of writers from around the world, united by their love of literature and support for each other's creative endeavors, and each member brings their unique style and voice to the group.

#OurAuthorGang is not just a name or hashtag - it represents a community built on mutual respect, creativity, and passion for storytelling. The members may come from different backgrounds and cultures, but they are connected by their shared love for literature and their determination to make an impact through their writing.

This diverse group showcases the power of collaboration and the potential it has to elevate individuals and create something truly special.

Click to watch the video and listen to our song

Enjoy our stories:

The song and video created by:

Erika M Szabo

https://authorerikamszabo.com

Erika loves to dance to her own tunes and follow her dreams, introducing her story-writing skills and her books that are based on creative imagination with themes such as magical realism, alternate history, urban fantasy, cozy mystery, sweet romance, and supernatural stories. Her children’s stories are informative and educational and deliver moral values in a non-preachy way.