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Saturday, November 2, 2024

A Through and Through Villain

 Mora, the villainess from The Ancestors' Secrets Series



Mora is a classic through-and-through villainess. Yet as we know more and more about her backstory, we're almost starting to understand what drives her and empathize with her, until her next cruel act... when we're passionately hating her again. 

The Royals and Elders were furious when they found out many centuries ago that Joland had shared the gift of eternal life with Mora and gave her the power to keep her body young. The Elders separated them, but they couldn’t make them mortal again. She has lived so many lifetimes, alone, because Joland was exiled to a timeline in the distant past. As his punishment, he couldn’t move forward in time with her. The Elders succeeded in taking away the ability to rejuvenate her body, which became bones with wasted muscles and shriveled skin. Although her withered body was useless, the power of her mind allowed her to reach the remotest part of the world and beyond. 

She wants power, she wants to rule, and most of all, she wants revenge. There is nothing she wouldn't do to achieve her goal. Will she succeed?

A short excerpt from the book

The soft humming of Mora's rotating, air-filled mattress relaxed her and protected her withered body from developing bed sores. Her castle was well hidden from prying eyes, deep in the woods on the mountainside. Nobody knew about its existence, only Zelda, her trusted servant throughout the centuries.
Mora didn’t allow anyone to see her in her miserable state, old and wrinkled. Her mind control ability helped her to make even Zelda see her in her youthful glory as she had known her so long ago, but she couldn’t completely conceal her body’s present state of old and wrinkled. The image of her old body is shown in Zelda’s mind through the youthful picture Mora projected.
​Mora closed her eyes and began searching the complicated network of the Collective Memory, in her mind. She murmured under her breath, “The Elders took everything I valued in life from me, but they never found out I could read every word that is written by every gifted Hunor after they reach maturity. When they use the ancient letters given to them by the Ancestors and they mention the meaning of the flowers, their lives are open books for me.”
Mora’s prune-like face lit up, “Good girl, Adel. You are the servant of the Leaders and can’t talk to anyone about this, but you just wrote in your diary that the Elders are planning a meeting. Oh, I see. One of them is about to take her last breath, and they need to choose her successor. Hmm… could I use it to my advantage? We’ll see. There is another interesting sentence here; you are worried about your mistress, Csenge. She seems distant and unhappy. Let’s see what our Leader has been writing…” she scoured Csenge’s desk in her mind.
“What?!” Mora shouted angrily when she read Csenge’s note in her calendar, “The Chosen One, Ilona, is coming of age today.” Mora was furious, “I can get into the minds of those who are related to me, but I can’t get into the Elders’ meeting or see the Chosen One. I curse you Ancestors for taking away my powers, and I curse you for tearing me away from the arms of my beloved, Joland. We’ll be together again one day, my love. I’ll find a way, somehow…”
In her fury, Mora clawed a hole in her soft comforter, but then, she started seeing an unfamiliar handwriting in her mind. Someone, unknown to her was writing a diary with the ancient Hunor letters. Mora’s rage calmed instantly as she rejoiced, “Ilona’s diary! She must be the Chosen One that Csenge wrote about.”
In her mind’s eye, the ancient Hunor letters appeared as Ilona wrote them in her diary. Dear diary, I’m supposed to keep a detailed journal from now on…
Mora grinned, “Write my little princess, and keep writing. I want to know everything about you.”
Mora continued her monologue in a subdued voice, “They will pay! But, for now, I have to gather every bit of information I could use for my revenge. Let me see what they’re writing about. Oh, so that’s where the Seer is hiding. She has written about every boring detail, but she never mentioned whose housekeeper she was. Damn, this crippled body and the constrictions they installed in my mind. Hah! The Chosen is in love with Bela, the mutt, now that’s ironic. His mother was excommunicated from the tribe for breaking the law. He’s useless to me but let me see what Zoltan is doing. At first, he refused to write in his diary, but his mother made sure that he does now. This is interesting! He decided to move to the town where the Chosen One works, which means that I can use him. Finally, my chance to change the future arrived. They must meet, and he has to get close enough to her, and then I will make him kill her, whenever I see fit.”

The Ancestors' Secrets




Epic fantasy-magical realism novels


Ilona resigns to live the simple life of a small-town doctor, but her life goes into a tailspin on her birthday. She finds out she was born into a secretive, ancient clan still hidden among us. She starts to develop unusual powers which she finds exciting as well as frightening. She can slow time and heal with her touch, but how and why?
She struggles to find answers, but those who try to reveal the clan secrets are severely punished.
A menacing man is following her and wants to kill her. Who is he?
More life struggles continue to plague her. After being thrust into a world of clan mysteries, obscure traditions, and beliefs, her life is drastically changing.
She must seek out and stop Mora’s evil plan. Punished by the ancestors long ago, Mora has waited centuries for the chance to reunite with her beloved Joland and to gain power over the Hunor clan. Revenge has kept her alive for over 1600 years.
Ilona must search for the mysterious Destiny Box that holds a message from her Ancestors while she attempts to sort out her feelings for the men in her life.
The spirits of the clan come to Ilona’s aid with answers to the clan’s secrets and the key to helping her maintain her sanity amidst the fear of danger lurking everywhere as she tries to succeed.
She must activate her Chameleon ability and obtain unimaginable powers. The clan Leaders and Elders are worried knowing that she can use her growing powers for absolute good or absolute evil. But they have no choice, they’re powerless against Mora and must place their trust in Ilona.
With the help of the clan’s Time Bender, her journey will take her back in time to when her people lived as nomads, to the castles of the 14th century as they struggle to overcome the obstacles in their path due to the evils of Mora.
Ilona finds her Destiny Box where the ancestors reveal what she must do—but it does not come without cost.
She must ensure the birth of the Chosen Child in the 4th century to save the future of the Hunor Clan. Will Ilona succeed in saving the child? Will she accept her destiny?

A review from Reader's Favorite


"I was keen to read The Ancestors' Secrets Series by Erika M Szabo for a couple of reasons. The first is that I was impressed by the premise and the promise of two strong female leads, and Mora and Ilona are worthy in this regard. Neither are perfect and even though we are not meant to like Mora, we do sort of understand her motive. It's deeper than the power and the revenge she seeks; we get that. She is not a cookie-cutter antagonist, and because Ilona is far from perfect herself, we are able to read through the eyes of women who are authentic. This is refreshing. The second part that piqued my interest is a modern female thrust back into the 1300s. This is something of an origin story, not just for Ilona but the entirety of the Hunor Clan. The magic is fun, but the tension and the settings are Szabo's best work."



Erika M Szabo

https://authorerikamszabo.com

Erika loves to dance to her own tunes and follow her dreams, introducing her story-writing skills and her books that are based on creative imagination with themes such as magical realism, alternate history, urban fantasy, cozy mystery, sweet romance, and supernatural stories. Her children’s stories are informative, and educational, and deliver moral values in a non-preachy way.

Saturday, October 6, 2018

Guest Author: David Polhemus #OurAuthorGang

Our guest today is David Polhemus


Hello Author gang,

My Name is David Polhemus and I live in beautiful Colorado Springs, Colorado. This place has inspired me to include its powerful spirit in my books. I am 51 years young and started writing book one of my series in 2011. I am in production with Axe Amazon Audible for book two in the Mitherion series because it’s a direct continuation of Mitherion book one. 

Mitherion (Book 1) 

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The book Mitherion is a small tale in a large world. It documents the story of Prometheus "Prom" and his friends Blue, Cee and Gahr. As their tale unveils we find them adventuring in the realm of Mitherion. Mitherion is a small portion of Pangaea. The supercontinent of Pangaea is a place that really existed one hundred and thirty million years ago. As the tale transpires we find the mighty warrior Prom returning to his friends through a dark and stormy night. Elsewhere, the angel Lucifer sires a child, a Nephilim named Luthisis. The plot thickens as Prom and company meet the arch-enemy of Lucifer, Magnus the first vampire who is plotting to kill Lucifer's son. Luthisis dwells in a horned tower in a vast desert in the distant south.
I am currently recording book one for the experiences and plan to have both Mitherion 1 and 2 in that format. I have learned so much more about my book from recording it and highly recommend you try it even just for the experience it creates for you and your writing.

Thanks for your time.
David Polhemus
Colorado Springs, Co

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Prolegomenon Alpha (Prolog)



Hello, my name is David Polhemus and I am the author of the Mitherion books.
The Mitherion stories so far are over a thousand pages long and thirty hours in length. I want to talk about the beginnings were it all came from, what my influences are and how my books came to be.
My first and main influence is J.R.R. Tolkien; I always liked his one foot in front of the other adventuring style in a large detailed world filled with good and evil.
I even like the Tolkien rip offs like the sword of Shannara.
Before I wrote my books I asked myself what kind of book do I want to write and then I knew it was going to be a fantasy adventure and I wanted to tell a story that I would really like. So I started with reading, listening on Audio book to all of Tolkien’s books including the Silmarillion and the new book the Children of Hurin. I researched the world maps and immersed myself in his style.
I have read hundreds of amazing stories and I want to mention a few here.
I read Battlefield Earth in the eighties one year after L. Ron. Hubbard died. That book is one of the best story’s I have ever read. It is over a thousand pages long and years ago I would buy used copies of it and hand them out to people if they wanted to read it.
Another one from my early days is a book by Bram Stoker called Dracula. I read it before I knew the story and it is an all-time favorite. The Vampire in my first book Magnus is a tribute to Bram Stokers Vampire. Magnus King Diamond in my book is a very different and original tale. I do not copy my influences I just interpret what I feel from them.
Another Author I really like is Piers Anthony his stories are very colorful and tongue in cheek but he always stretches the boundaries of the imagination. I like the first book of the Incarnations of immortality especially the first one were death gets shot in the face and dies and the shooter has to become death in his place. The Spilt infinity series by Piers Anthony splits science fiction with fantasy having the main character go between both realms.
Moving on,
The Inferno by Dante is a hard book to read and very dark but is filled with amazing depth and suffering in vast areas and in great graphic depiction.
Alike the Inferno, the next book is a kindred spirit to it and is one of my most favorite in the genre of hell depiction. It is called Gods Demon. It’s a newer book compared to the inferno which is over one thousand years old. Gods demon is a vast slow dirge on how the dukes and royalty of hell who are the fallen angels make there palaces and kingdoms from bricks made of the fallen souls that land in hell, a good book for the kids. This author wrote the book to match his artwork which is even stranger.
Robert A. Heinlein and his book Starship Troopers changed the way I understood what books could do. His space marines being shot from space to the ground influenced my jettisoned warriors the bombardier troopers in book one.
Let’s change gears a bit I want to talk about my teen years. When I was fourteen I owned every issue of the original Star Wars comic books. I was at the age when they seemed like magic, until my stepmother Karen made me rip them up as a punishment.
Just for the record I now own three complete sets of that original Star Wars Comic series.
I do love fantasy it’s my favorite genre, but there are too many unbelievably books filled with gods and mages and witches.
Fantasy Adventure is my favorite kind of story. So not finding any good ones I decided to write my own book and bring the excitement of Tolkien and Battlefield earth and Starship troopers mixed with Bram Stoker and my years of D and D experience with me into my own original story then I would have control and the excitement of making the magic. Having learned how to play Dungeons and Dragons at the age of fourteen in junior high I have used that knowledge at fifty one along with all those years of lessons and experience as a palate to paint my masterpiece.
My imagination is very powerful and I am creative. I didn’t steel anything from my influences; I just let my own ideas grow from them.
Lastly I want to mention that ten years ago I found the magic of audio Books and have consumed hundreds and hundreds of the best and most amazing stories since then. Some of the very best books I have listened to because it’s the way I read nowadays. Every night I set my IPod touch sleep alarm and fade away into adventure. The best Audio Books are up to you and you tastes.
I really like Post-Apocalyptic survival, bug out treks through societal break down, EMP (electromagnetic pulse) sun flares, zombie apocalypse, anything were a small band of people have to go somewhere against great and tricky odds.
Thanks for your time and thanks for listening.
David Polhemus
Prolegomenon: 2


Mitherion is my first book; I started writing in late 2012 and finished it in 2015.
I’ve rewritten it now in 2017 getting it ready for Audible audio books. Writing books one and two gained me many years of experience and I’ve used it going back through both books line by line. I cut out bloated sections and added enhancements detailing the stories with several upgrades and corrections. The improvements in my craft have made the books far better than I could before. I have defined the people places and encounters in a better way re-evolving the book’s writing making it grow and become clearer in a much better version.

I’ve rewritten both books now to make them better with the improvements in my craft. I’m reinterpreting the books as if the people and places and encounters are real. I see them very clearly now. The Characters have been trying to leap off the pages and escape from fantasy into reality for a very long time because they are real to me. They are parts of me and my family and my friends and my enemies.


The rewriting of my books happened on plains but on no train and in my automobile. Every day at work on my IPad 12 and on my computer in my room painted gold. It came to me in waking dreams and from thin air. In the beginning I wrote on scraps and grocery store bags. Now here it is in the best version ever. Enjoy this adventure with Prom and his friends in the vast ancient land of Mitherion.

In conclusion I would like to say I’m not even close to finishing yet. My third book which the first six chapters are included here is going to be an epic worldwide fantasy adventure.
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Nikki McDonagh

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Hi David!
 
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Ruth de Jauregui via Google+

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Today #OurAuthorGang welcomes author David Polhemus. His epic fantasy Mitherion books are available in paperback and he's working on the audiobooks now!
 
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Ruth de Jauregui

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Welcome to our blog, David! Your book sounds great!
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Toi Thomas

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Thanks for joining us today David. Your stories sounds interesting and your adventure with creating audiobooks sounds exciting.
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Cindy Smith

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Welcome and best wishes for your endeavors
 
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Erika M Szabo

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Nice to have you on our blog David
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Lorraine Carey

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It's so great to have you as a guest today, David. You do live in a beautiful place that will inspire you to write. Your new books sounds very interesting.
 
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