Wednesday, June 10, 2026

Should I Continue Writing This Book?

 Chapter One

My writing method is a bit weird. I don't write notes on the timeline, plot, or characters. Usually, something triggers an idea in my mind, and I let my imagination do the rest. 
I start writing and think of the next 4-5 steps ahead. Later, I go back and change or add something, but usually the story flows pretty smoothly as I progress with the chapters.

Although I just finished writing chapter one, this will not be the final version. As the story flows, I might go back to rewrite parts of it.

Let me know what you think

Did the beginning of the story catch your attention? 
Does this chapter promise you a story you'd like to read as a full novel?

Chapter One

The heavy oak door of the Historical Archives groaned in protest as Jayden pushed it open, the cool air a stark contrast to the bustling Budapest street outside. Sunlight filtered through stained-glass windows depicting scenes of Hungarian conquest and artistry, casting a web of colors across the polished marble floor. He’d been there before, years ago, a wide-eyed archaeological student tracing his ancestral footsteps. Now, as a recognized archaeologist and full-time employee, he was there with a purpose, a singular, all-consuming mission that had driven him across an ocean to discover his heritage. On his first day on the job, he was punctual and even switched from his usual T-shirt and faded jeans to a not-so-neatly-ironed shirt and trousers. His thick, brown hair was tied with a rubber band, and face neatly shaved, he was looking forward to meeting Dr. Molnar, a great source of the history of the Hunnic Empire.

His gaze swept across the grand hall, a silent testament to centuries of history. Busts of stern-faced monarchs and stoic generals lined the walls, their marble eyes seeming to judge his youthful ambition. Jayden adjusted the strap of his worn leather satchel that contained all his scribbled notes, digitized maps, and photocopied ancient texts. He was searching for a needle in a haystack; a burial site lost to time but whispered about in hushed tones and dismissed by most as folklore. Attila the Hun’s final resting place.

He approached the information desk, a polished mahogany behemoth manned by a woman with a stern expression, hair pulled back in a severe bun. “Excuse me,” Jayden began, his voice a little too loud in the solemn quiet. “I’m a new employee, and I’m supposed to report to Dr. Molnar.”

The woman blinked, her expression unreadable. “Third floor.” Her tone was flat and efficient.

Jayden offered a polite nod.

Dr. Andras Molnar, a renowned, though eccentric, historian who had supposedly dedicated his later years to the very subject Jayden was now obsessed with. Molnar’s published works were sparse, but the few he had written hinted at a deep, intuitive understanding of the Huns. Jayden had managed to secure a position in his department, a lifeline in his otherwise solitary research.

He navigated the echoing corridors, the sheer volume of artifacts overwhelming. Armoires, weaponry, ornate jewelry, each piece a silent story, a fragment of a life lived long ago. He found the stairs and ascended, the air growing slightly warmer, the scent of old paper and dust more prominent. The third floor was quiet. Display cases and shelves held pottery shards, faded textiles, and arrowheads, each meticulously labelled with dates and origin.

The door was wide open to Dr. Molnar’s office. Jayden peeked in and scanned the cramped room overflowing with books. Piles of academic journals teetered precariously on shelves that sagged under their weight. Jayden knocked.

No answer. He knocked again, a little louder.

He heard a muffled cough, then the shuffle of papers. A woman in her late twenties stood up, her dark hair pulled back into a messy bun that seemed to defy gravity. She wore a practical, slightly paint-splattered linen shirt and sensible slacks, her hands stained with what looked like ink. Her eyes, a startling shade of intelligent green, widened slightly.

“Yes?” she asked, her voice a warm alto, laced with a hint of weariness.

Jayden felt a momentary pang of disappointment. This wasn’t Dr. Molnar. “I’m sorry,” he stammered, “I’m looking for Dr. Andras Molnar. I had been hired by him and…”

The woman offered a small, apologetic smile. “Oh, Jayden Marlow. Dr. Molnar told me you’re starting today, but he’s… not in… today is the third day he didn’t show up, which is highly unusual.” She smiled politely. “I’m Anna Novak. I’m his research assistant.”

Jayden’s shoulders slightly sagged, feeling disappointed. He’d counted so much on this meeting. “Nice to meet you, Miss Novak.” he extended a hand.

Anna’s grip was firm, her touch surprisingly cool, her gaze sharp, appraising. “Dr. Molnar said you’ve signed a full-year contract with us to extend your research.”

“Yes,” Jayden replied, trying to read her expression. He hesitated, then decided to take a chance. “I’m particularly interested in the Hunnic period. Specifically… the potential location of Attila’s burial site.”

Anna’s eyebrows shot up, a flicker of genuine surprise replacing the weariness in her eyes. She leaned against the desk, crossing her arms. “Attila’s burial site,” she mused, a faint smile playing on her lips. “A classic. The Huns were a bit… more elusive than leaving clear written records behind.”

“More elusive, perhaps,” Jayden conceded, stepping further into the cluttered office, drawn by her intelligent curiosity. “But that’s precisely what makes it so compelling. The legends, the lack of concrete evidence… it all points to something deliberately hidden.”

Anna’s gaze shifted from his face to a worn leather satchel on his shoulder. “Deliberately hidden,” she echoed, her voice thoughtful. “And what makes you think it’s here, in the archives, rather than somewhere in the Great Plains of Hungary, or even further east?”

Jayden gestured toward a stack of books near her desk. “Dr. Molnar’s work. His theories on the strategic significance of river systems, the migratory patterns… he seemed to hint at a more complex geographical puzzle than most have considered.”

Anna’s smile widened, a genuine spark igniting in her green eyes. “Ah, his ‘river of gold’ theory. He was always fascinated by the union of natural waterways. I assume you’ve read all his books.”

“Obsessively,” Jayden admitted, a flush creeping up his neck. He felt a sudden surge of validation, that someone else understood the depth of his interest, the intellectual current that had pulled him here.

“Obsessively is good,” Anna said, her tone laced with amusement. “He would appreciate that. He believed the key wasn’t just in the texts, but in the nuances of language, the forgotten dialects, the coded messages left on everyday items by those who sought to protect their secrets.”

She pushed a stray strand of hair behind her ear as Jayden watched her, intrigued. There was an intensity about her, a sharp focus that mirrored his own. He felt a strange sense of ease, a connection forming in this cluttered space, amidst the ghosts of centuries past.

“That’s going to be your desk.” Anna pointed at the desk buried under stacks of papers and books. “It’s a bit of a mess; I didn’t have time to clean it for you,” she said, with a slight shrug of her shoulders.

“No problem. I’m not really known for my neat working environment.” He laughed. “What are you working on?”

“I’ve been working on cataloging a recent find. A quiver made of leather,” Anna said, her voice shifting to a professional tone. “Mostly unremarkable, until…” She trailed off, her gaze drifting to a long object on a nearby table, covered by a dark cloth, and stood up. “Until I found something etched on the inside.”

Jayden followed her to the table, his archaeologist’s instinct kicking into overdrive. “Etched? What kind of etchings?”

Anna walked over to the table and, with a swift motion, pulled back the cloth, revealing an arrow holder, a quiver. On the hardened leather were faint, almost invisible markings. Jayden squinted, leaning in closer. They were runes dotted with a few archaic symbols he couldn’t immediately place.

“Rovásírás,” Anna said softly, her voice filled with a quiet reverence. “Hungarian runes, mixed with something older, something… else.”

Jayden felt a thrill shoot through him, cold and exhilarating. Rovásírás. He had studied it, though his proficiency was not perfect yet. “Would you mind telling me what it says?”

Anna’s green eyes met his, blazing with excitement. “It’s… fragmented. But some phrases are undeniably significant. ‘The water’s turn,’ it says here.” She pointed to a cluster of symbols. “And then, ‘the serpent’s sleep.’ And a direction… ‘west of the great bend.’”

Jayden’s mind raced, piecing together Anna’s words with Dr. Molnar’s theory and his own research. The Tisza River’s ancient course. The legends of Attila, often associated with water and hidden riches. “The water’s turn…” he murmured, his voice hushed with an emerging realization. “And the serpent’s sleep… a riverbed? A dry riverbed, perhaps?”

Anna nodded, her gaze locked on the etchings. “That’s what I suspect. The ‘great bend’… it could refer to a significant geographical feature. And ‘west of’ it… this is more than just a quiver. Don’t you think?”

Jayden met her gaze. He could feel the weight of years of solitary searching lifting. “I believe,” Jayden said, his voice barely a whisper, “it might be the key. The key to Attila’s resting place.”

He watched Anna’s face, the intensity of her focus, the way her mind was already dissecting the problem, and a feeling of profound hope, a sensation he hadn't allowed himself to entertain for years.

“The challenge now,” Anna was saying, her finger tracing the line of a particularly intricate rune, “is to ascertain which ‘great bend’ and which river. Every river, including the Tisza, has shifted course over time.”

“But the arrow case… it’s dated, isn’t it? Can we narrow down the period?” Jayden asked, his mind already racing through cartographical and historical data he’d meticulously compiled.

Anna nodded, her gaze still on the case. “The craftsmanship suggests a mid-5th-century origin. That places it squarely within Attila’s reign. And the materials, the pigments used to preserve the leather… they’re consistent with burial artifacts from that era.”

“But if it’s a clue to Attila’s tomb,” Jayden pressed, “then it would have been placed with immense care, likely by someone who knew its significance, someone who wanted to protect it. Where was it found?”

“Far from the Tisza River, in the eastern part of the country. An excavation revealed a burial mound, the grave of a Taltos. Every artifact in the chamber beneath the mound was surprisingly well preserved, as you see.”

The wheels in Jayden’s mind were turning furiously. “Dr. Molnar’s work,” he mused aloud, “he talked about how the Huns were masters of deception, of creating phantom armies, of disappearing into the landscape. They wouldn’t leave a direct trail, not for something as sacred as their Great King’s final resting place.”

Anna turned from the display, her expression thoughtful. “Precisely. So, ‘the water’s turn’ and ‘the serpent’s sleep’ could be metaphors, not literal geographical markers. Or perhaps they are literal, but so obscured by time and geological change that only someone with intimate knowledge of the land, and a keen eye for its subtle shifts, could interpret them.” She ran a hand through her dark hair. “It’s a fascinating puzzle. And one that requires more than just deciphering runes. It requires understanding the Hunnic mindset.”

Jayden nodded. “I’ve spent years studying their nomadic strategies, their military tactics, their cultural practices. I have a… a feeling for them. My family is from Hungary, you see. There’s a part of me that’s always felt connected to the past.”

Anna’s eyes softened slightly. “I understand. My own family has deep roots here. We carry the history of centuries in our blood.” She gestured around the cramped office. “This is my world. Trying to make sense of it all. To give a voice to those who have been forgotten by time.”

Jayden felt a surge of admiration for her. “So,” he said, trying to suppress the growing admiration for her, “if we assume the arrow case is genuine, and the clue is encoded, how do we begin to verify the ‘great bend’ and the ‘water’s turn’?”

“We…” Anna acknowledged with a small smile, a question shining in her eyes as she looked at Jayden.

“Sorry, I didn’t mean…” Jayden mumbled. “I assumed we could be working together because…”

“Because we’re both obsessed with the past?” Anna smiled.

“Yes,” Jayden sighed, returning the smile.

“Right. We start with maps,” Anna said decisively, her focus returning to the task at hand. “Ancient maps, geological surveys, satellite imagery of the Tisza basin. We look for anomalies, for river courses that don’t match current topography, for any indication of a significant ancient diversion. And we cross-reference that with any historical accounts of Hunnic presence in those specific regions.”

She began to rummage through the piles of books and papers on her desk, her movements efficient and purposeful.

“Dr. Molnar,” Jayden said, “does he have any specific hypotheses about where this ‘great bend’ might be?”

Anna paused, a thick, leather-bound volume in her hands. “He was always drawn to the region around Szeged. The confluence of the Tisza and the Maros rivers. He believed it was a significant strategic point for the Huns, a place of power and potentially, a place for something hidden.” She tapped the book. “This is one of his unpublished journals. He was working on a comprehensive theory of Attila’s burial. I haven’t fully read it yet, but some passages are… intriguing.”

She placed the journal on her desk, sat down, and rolled her chair to reach her computer. “Let me access the museum’s digital archives. I’ve been comparing his theories with hard cartographical data. It requires a lot of cross-referencing.”

As Anna began to type, her fingers flying across the keyboard, Jayden leaned forward, watching her, a renewed sense of urgency building within him when he noticed a tiny flicker from the corner of her eye. Turning toward the wall where a painting of a nobleman hung in full 16th-century Hungarian attire. He scanned the painting and noticed a dark object at the corner of the frame.

“You know,” Anna said, without looking up from her screen, “Dr. Molnar believed that the Huns deliberately used misdirection. That the legends of vast treasures were partly a lure, to draw attention away from the true hiding place, and partly a warning. ‘Do not seek what is meant to remain hidden,’ he once wrote.”

Jayden turned and walked to the painting, taking a closer look. He pulled off a small, circular device, no larger than a coin. It was sleek, metallic, and utterly alien to his usual archeological tools. A camera. He thought of examining the device.

Anna looked up, her eyes questioning his sudden stillness. “Jayden? What is it?”

Jayden held up the device, his face a mask of striking realization. “Someone had planted this. And they’ve been watching Dr. Molnar and you.” He stared at the device in his palm, then at Anna, her intelligent green eyes now wide with alarm. “I think Dr. Molnar’s absence might be… more than just a coincidence.”

The air in the office, which had moments before been charged with intellectual excitement, now felt thick with suspicion and the cold, metallic tang of betrayal. The whisper of history had become a shout of immediate danger.

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