Saturday, March 22, 2025
Author R. A. "Doc" Correa at #OurAuthorGang
Friday, March 21, 2025
The Fortuneteller #OurAuthorGang
A short story by Guest Author Sara Sartagne
Lewis grinned at Sophie as a lock of her
blonde hair tangled in her candyfloss.
She wrinkled her nose in disgust. “Hold
this, can you?” She passed the sticky, sweet mess to him while she searched for
a tissue to wipe her hair. As she did, he winked appreciatively.
“Surprised you can fit anything else into
those jeans,” he said, his eyes roving over her neat denim-clad rear.
She swatted his shoulder. “Enough leering!”
He laughed in that deep voice of his, and
she grinned back, her thumb automatically finding the diamond ring on her left
hand. He’d been so nervous when he proposed. She’d been so excited. It was
perfect. She hooked her arm through his and took back her candyfloss.
They walked slowly through the fairground,
not speaking. Sophie felt a bone-deep contentment as even their steps seemed to
match. The light flashed, the music blared from every stall, every ride, and
the smell of fried onions and beer floated on the midsummer air, but it seemed
muted as she walked in a perfect bubble of happiness with her husband to be.
“Fancy the big dipper?” he said, nodding
casually to the ride which soared metres above them, with cars full of high
screams. Sophie sniffed, her stomach rebelling against the smell of gasoline
and oil.
“After this? You’re having me on,” she
replied, dragging him towards a bin and throwing her half-finished candyfloss
into it with relief. It had been sicklier than she’d remembered. She saw a
small tent in a quieter part of the ground. Outside, a sign said, ‘Madame
Appolonia, fortune teller. Do you dare to seek your future?’
She paused and nudged Lewis. “Let’s go in
here,” she said. “It’ll be a laugh.”
Lewis looked sceptical. “I’m not going to
waste ten quid for some fraud wearing red lipstick to tell me you’re going to
meet a tall handsome man and live happily ever after! I already know that –
you’re marrying me!”
“Oh, don’t be such a misery guts. Who knows
what she’ll say? My mum’s really keen on this kind of thing, she swears by it!”
Sophie said with a moue of disappointment.
He grumbled, but handed over the money to a
spotty youth outside the tent, who showed them in. As Lewis expected, it was
dimly lit with a faint smell of incense, and a woman with long dark hair and a
shawl was sitting in front of a low table. She stared at them with almost black
eyes, and Lewis felt a shiver of discomfort. He forced a smile.
“Hello, I’m Lewis and this is Sophie.”
The woman gestured to them to take a seat.
“You are engaged,” the woman said in a gentle voice which seemed to come from
the depths of her chest.
She saw the ring, Lewis thought. Sophie
laughed and congratulated the woman on her accuracy. The woman, who looked
neither young nor old, smiled slightly.
“What knowledge do you seek?” she said.
Sophie leaned forward.
“Oh, the usual. Will we have children? Will
we be happy?”
The woman’s face went blank and for a
moment she hesitated. “Give me your left hand.”
Sophie put out her palm and the woman took
it carefully. Madame Appolina’s hands were smooth and cool. “This is your heartline,”
she said, pointing to a crease at the top of her palm. “You have loved two men
in your life passionately, but one of the men has broken your heart. The other
has mended it.”
Sophie and Lewis exchanged a look. Sophie
had suffered from a callous break up. Lewis had comforted her, first as a
friend and then as she gradually recovered, the relationship had deepened to
love.
Lewis schooled his face. Some of this would
be cold reading, he thought. He was determined not to give anything away. Madame
Appolonia quirked an eyebrow as if she could read his thoughts. Turning back,
she curled Sophie’s fingers and looked at the lines and bumps of her hand. “You
are wilful and headstrong,” she said to Sophie, whose eyes widened. “People say
that you follow your own course, not that of others.”
Lewis stiffened. He’d said that only
yesterday. Sophie turned a little pale. Madame Appolonia continued in a soft
voice. “You wish to be a painter, creativity is strong in your immediate
future. You make decisions instinctively.” She turned those dark eyes to Lewis.
“It is you who are the rational one in the relationship, but you too
have an artistic yearning. You may study engineering, but you will always want
to be a musician.”
At this, Sophie gasped. “Oh, my God! That’s
so right!”
Lewis fought the urge to jump to his feet
and flee this dim, spooky space with the unearthly woman in it. But Sophie,
eyes shining, laughed delightedly.
“You really are good! Can you tell
us about our future together?”
A veil seemed to drop over Madame
Appolina’s eyes. She nodded. “I see a long and happy marriage,” she said
finally.
“And children?” Sophie insisted.
“Two. A boy will come first, the girl two
years later.”
Sophie clapped her hands and jumped to her
feet, laughing and thanking Madame Appolina, who simply nodded. Lewis, lost for
words, could only grab Sophie’s hand and push his way out of the tent.
Madame Appolina released a long breath and
closed her eyes. All was still, and then the ghost of her mother appeared in
front of the tent flap.
“Why did you lie?” the ghost asked. Madame
Appolina shook her head sadly, her vision of twisted metal and spinning car
wheels on a hot dusty road at the end of the summer seared on her memory. The
blaring sirens, the frantic paramedics. And then – silence.
She sighed. “They’re so young, so in love.
How could I tell them? Let them have their happiness a little while longer.”
The ghost of her mother nodded and faded
away.
Sara Sartagne
Sara Sartagne writes women’s fiction featuring brave women, often weaving love stories through the narrative. Her English Garden Romance series reflects her passion for gardening. The novellas are downloadable from her website. The Duality books combine contemporary and historical plots into award-winning standalone dual timelines. She lives in East Yorkshire, moving from London to a HUGE garden in 2019.
Thursday, March 20, 2025
Online Magazine
Do people still read magazines?
Erika M Szabo
Erika loves to dance
to her own tunes and follow her dreams, introducing her story-writing skills
and her books that are based on creative imagination with themes such as
magical realism, alternate history, urban fantasy, cozy mystery, sweet romance,
and supernatural stories. Her children’s stories are informative and
educational and deliver moral values in a non-preachy way.
Wednesday, March 19, 2025
Famous Authors at #OurAuthorGang Jean M. Auel
Jean M. Auel
The Clan of the Cave Bear audiobook
Tuesday, March 18, 2025
Flash Fiction Challenge 7 at #OurAuthorGang
Challenge accepted by Eva Bielby
Eva's challenge was to write a flash fiction story of less than 500 words, based on this picture:
THISTLEDENT MANOR
Isaac Dent moved Dilys, his bride of
ten months, into Thistledent Manor in 1742. The rambling old house was
bequeathed to Isaac by Alfred Dent, his grandfather. A once healthy and active
landowner, Alfred had succumbed to viral pneumonia prior to Isaac’s wedding. He’d
always cherished the special bond with his grandson. Isaac enjoyed fishing,
hunting and shooting, where he excelled. Venison was frequently served at the
table during the dinner parties held at the Dent house, courtesy of Isaac and
his prowess with a rifle. Alfred had loved to boast about Isaac’s skills.
During four hopeful years, a
complicated miscarriage left Dilys unable to bear children. Isaac saw her
despair; the haunted look and guilt in her eyes. He was broken. He was unsure
what to do to make Dilys smile again. Late one night as his wife slept beside
him, Isaac was awake and an idea formed in his head. He was going to fill the
house with orphaned children.
The Battle of Culloden had been fought
and many local men were killed in the bloodthirsty clash. Some of their widows
were dying of malnutrition as they struggled and kept food mainly for their
children. Within weeks, Isaac and Dilys had filled their home with eleven youngsters
- two babies and the remainder were between three and eleven years old. Dilys
was ecstatic and quickly grew to love each one of them, but she struggled despite
the help from the servants. Responding to their advertisement, an older lady,
Agatha McTavish, was soon taken into the fold as nanny and teacher.
After several months, Dilys noticed
four or five of the children had become withdrawn and sullen. She discussed the
matter with Agatha, who suggested it was the trauma of losing their parents.
Dilys acknowledged that there could be some truth in Agatha’s suggestion, but
continued to dwell on the matter, after all, the children had seemed happy at
first during Dilys’ love and nurturing.
Dilys continued to feed and settle the two babies after dinner each evening, leaving nanny to bathe the older children and tuck them into their beds. On leaving the nursery one night, she heard shouts and screams coming from along the passageway. There was an almighty crash and Dilys arrived at the open doorway in time to witness nine-year-old Angus McArthur’s spirit leave his body. His broken body lay naked and crumpled on the floor, blood pooling beneath his head. Deep red welts covered the skin on his back. Agatha stood over him. The whip in her hand dropped to the floor when she saw Dilys.
Isaac and Dilys moved away with their
‘family’ the following morning.
Thistledent Manor remains abandoned.
The villagers often hear shouts and screams, those of Agatha and poor Angus,
and the crack of a whip coming from the derelict, forbidding house.
Sadly, Dilys Dent never slept much
after the events at Thistledent Manor. Her disturbing dreams always ended with
Agatha’s face, a deep, bloodied gash across her throat.
Eva Bielby
Eva Bielby was born
in North Yorkshire in the Northeast of England. She has spent over thirty years
of her working life as a company accountant. Eva has a keen interest in
spiritualism/mediumship and has attended several workshops to develop her
skills further. During her quieter moments, Eva enjoys a cryptic crossword,
sudoku, and gardening.
Monday, March 17, 2025
Campfire Stories 11 at #OurAuthorGang
The Moon Bears Witness by Dawn Treacher
The rucksack
was far heavier than she'd anticipated, the air fare exceeded her budget, just,
but Frances had already booked time off work, boasted about it to her friends
and bought a full colour guidebook.
It was
happening and she wasn't going to let her niggling lack of confidence stop her
this time, nor the reservations of her work colleague.
"You're
seriously going hiking with someone you met online?"
"It's not
like that, Tasmin, it's a reputable guide, with fellow hikers."
"But it's
off grid, right, as in, wild camping, carrying your own water, no toilet, that
kind of off grid?"
"Look,
Tasmin, I'll be thirty next month and I haven't even been on holiday abroad,
not once. You know what I said about this year, it's time to stretch those
horizons, seek out new experiences."
"Yes, I
get that, but I was thinking along the lines of trying the new Malaysian
restaurant, enrolling in a language course, looking for a better job, not using
behind a bush for a toilet in front of strangers and making one pair of
knickers last three days.”
Frances
couldn’t wait to tell Tasmin just how wrong she’d been. Having arrived in her
destination, they’d been walking three days. She’d been expecting to meet the
guide, Anya, plus two more hikers but when she got off the plane there was only
Anya to meet her. Her fellow would be hikers had cried off; a medical
emergency, a family funeral. Those things happen. But immediately Frances took
a liking to Anya. Her appearance was striking, her enthusiasm contagious. After
only a hour’s hiking across the windswept landscape, the air hot and dry,
Frances had easily forgotten the fresh blisters that formed, the weight of her
pack, the insects which bit her exposed arms.
On their third
evening, Anya chose a site next to a deep blue lake.
“We’ll set camp
here”, she said. “Make a fire.”
Frances had
surprised herself by quickly picking up skills she’d never dreamed of,
collecting wood, getting a campfire to spark, and nurturing the flames. The
smell of smoke heralded the chance to massage her feet, absorb the stillness of
the air, enjoy the rugged landscape of boulders, the fragrant spruce, the water
before her a pool of the deepest blues. But most of all, Frances relished
listening to Anya, who would talk until the moon was their light, the air
filled with the sounds of the night. Frances had never sat by a campfire
before; she loved the smell of it, the sound, the sound of Anya’s voice, deep
and rich at times, haunting. The light of the fire warmed the colour of Anya’s
skin. Anya’s tales had been of her adventures, the people she’d met, the
legends which ran through the regions like seams of precious metal through
rock. Like a small child listening to a mother, Frances had been entranced by
her words, words which brought alive places she’d never been, people that
seemed so real they could have been sitting with them, sharing the hot tea
they’d brewed, laughing together. But that evening something had shifted, in
the way Anya had moved closer to the fire letting the heat of its flames glow
on her face, glint in her eyes. Her voice took on an edge of chill which made the
skin on Frances’ arms inadvertently shiver.
“They say the
water here holds a secret,” said Anya, sitting crossed legged beside the fire,
her eyes never leaving those of Frances.
“What kind of
secret?”
“The water
bears the souls of the dead.”
Frances shifted
her position on the ground. “You mean, someone died here?”
Anya looked out
across the water. She picked up a small stone that sat near her feet and
skimmed it across the lake; it skipped several times before disappearing into
the inky depths.
“Not everyone
who has walked this land leaves it. It is said the souls of three campers
remain here .The missing are not always found.”
“What happened
to them?” asked Frances.
“Their stories
have never been told,” said Anya “But their absence is still felt, appeals from
their families
still ardent, despite the years which have passed.”
Something moved
in the shadows beside them. A wisp of cloud moved across the face of the moon.
“But you
shouldn’t fear the wilds,” continued Anya. “We are born from the earth, we
encompass it, we are part of it and one day we will return to it.”
She eased
another log in place. A new spark ignited, a flare in the dark. The shadows
deepened across the lake. A cry of an animal rang out, its echo blown across
the water. A larger drift of cloud shrouded the moon. Frances wrapped a small
blanket around her shoulders.
“Do you know
who these campers were?” asked Frances.
“I’ve heard
their names. They weren’t much older than you. They came seeking adventure. But
some adventurers are misguided. I believe the youngest made the mistake of
coming alone.”
An uneasiness
tingled in Frances’ legs, rising up into her whole being. “Are you saying they
may be around somewhere?”
“They were
reported to have walked these mountains, these hills, trodden the ground we
walked today, yes. They too looked at these waters, smelt this air. These rocks
heard their voices, that moon looked down upon their faces. This land knows
their stories.”
“But haven’t
they been looked for, has this area been searched?” asked Frances, staring into
the lake before her.
“Why of course.
But no trace was found. Rain cleanses the rocks, time erodes details.”
“But what about
the lake?” Frances tucked the blanket up around her chin and shifted a little
further from the water’s edge.
“Oh, the lake
will never give up its secrets. Its waters run deep, too deep. This place is
too remote. You know yourself the gradient you’ve climbed, the twists of the
paths, the density of the trees, in places so close there is barely air between
them to breathe. No, the water will hold their souls, their truth.
Anya inched
nearer to where Frances huddled. Her mind flew to Tasmin, their banter about
wild camping. Frances wished she’d stuck to learning a foreign language. The
very ground beneath her seamed to tremble.
“Do you really
believe their bodies are in this lake?” Frances’ words seemed to shiver as they
left her lips.
“I know they
are,” said Anya. “But don’t worry, I see fear in your eyes. I am your guide. I
know this place better than anyone. I’ve swam in these waters, slept peacefully
beside it. Listened to its sounds, its whispers.”
Frances relaxed
her shoulders a little. The fire released a spark as Anya poked it. The embers
glowed white with heat.
“Soon you will
be joining them. You will become part of their story, part of the richness of
this land.”
Anya leaned
closer still. “But don’t worry, the water will hold you close, hold your secret
closer still. No one will hear you. Only the rocks. Only the moon will bear
witness and I will never tell.”
Only Anya heard
Frances scream. The clouds slipped in front of the moon and the surface of the
waters shivered.
Dawn Treacher
Dawn Treacher is
based in North Yorkshire, England. She writes in both adult crime fiction and
children's middle grade fantasy adventures. She is also an illustrator of
children's fiction, an artist and plush artist. She runs both a writing
critique group and a creative writing group and goes into schools to promote
storytelling.
Sunday, March 16, 2025
Book Sunday at #OurAuthorGang
Featured books today is an Anthology Series
The What If? Anthology Series
When a collective of talented authors merge their literary
skills and unleash their imaginations, a series is born to delight readers who
crave thought-provoking stories and aren't afraid to ask the question,
"What if?"
With each turn of the page, readers are transported to
fantastic worlds where anything is possible, and every twist and turn leaves
them eagerly anticipating what will happen next.
This collaboration of creative minds brings to life a
captivating journey for those who dare to question the boundaries of reality
and embrace the possibilities of the unknown. Each story is a treasure trove of
imagination and creativity, showcasing the authors' diverse voices and talents.
Saturday, March 15, 2025
Author Erika M Szabo at #OurAuthorGang
Meet the author
Erika M Szabo
Friday, March 14, 2025
A Trip to the Dump #OurAuthorGang
A short story by David W. Thompson
OK, we’ve gotten fancy these days, so “dump” isn’t correct anymore—politically
or otherwise. Nowadays, we take journeys to the “Convenience Center,” so named
because we’ve added a couple of recycling bins. The vast mountain ranges of
cast-away rubbish are now compressed into a ginormous dumpster. After crushing,
our kitchen trash, along with many forgotten keepsakes, are hauled away to
parts unknown. Sad, but we humans are a wasteful lot.
Behind our local convenience center is a large acreage comprised
of our old and now defunct “dump.” It is tons of trash covered with mounds of
dirt. It will be many years before
people deem it anything other than a wasteland. But is it? In the evenings,
before closing time there, I’ve seen herds of deer chasing each other and
foraging in the wild grass that has sprouted despite our meddlesome intrusion. Our “dump” has become a sanctuary for them. No
houses will be built there, and no shopping malls or parking lots will disturb
its unlikely tranquility. Nature is reclaiming its own. It gives recycling a
whole new meaning.
A cottage industry has grown around garbage. Those without
the requisite pickup truck essential for rural life hire others to haul away
their weekly cast-offs. It seems trash is good for the economy.
I remember when my kids were small. My youngest loved going
on ride-a-longs to the dump—yes, it was still a dump back then. As the youngest
of three, she and I had a rare opportunity to spend some “us” time together. At
least, I think that is why, although the occasional tossed aside and outgrown
toy might also have been a draw for her also. But as she is now a military
spouse and too often stationed many miles away, I treasure those memories of
then.
Maybe we lost something when the dump became a convenience
center. Many treasures were once found among the piles of forgotten gems.
Today’s dumpster divers don’t have the same positive connotation as pickers,
the ultimate recyclers.
While disposing of several bags today, I noticed people are
friendlier at the “convenience center.” Total strangers take a moment to share
pleasantries while completing the shared, if unpleasant, task. It’s as if we
realize we can let down our protective masks here. There are no false facades at
the dump—everyone is equal when their trash is exposed for everyone to see. Our
world can be divisive, but our similarities are never more apparent than when
accomplishing the mundane.
My parents kept many of my feeble attempts at art and a
story or two that I penned over the years. I did the same for my once little
ones—boxes full. How do you decide what stays and what goes? I even have
several baby teeth bagged up that the tooth fairy passed along as mementos…
Strange to modern ears, I guess, as we are a throwaway society. I worry that
that mentality might go beyond material things to our moral code and our faith
in each other…? Out with the old and in with the new? I pray not as I weigh what is important to
keep and what is past its usefulness to me.
I’ll ponder it some more…on my next trip to the dump.
David W. Thompson
https://www.david-w-thompson.com
David is a multiple award-winning author,
Army veteran, and graduate of UMUC. He’s a multi-genre writer and a member of
the Horror Writers’ Association, and the Science Fiction & Fantasy Writers
Association. When not writing, Dave enjoys family, kayaking, fishing, hiking,
hunting, winemaking, and woodcarving.
Wednesday, March 12, 2025
Famous Authors at #OurAuthorGang Sir Author Conan Doyle
Sir Arthur Conan Doyle
Sir Arthur Ignatius Conan Doyle was a British writer and
physician, born on May 22, 1859, in Edinburgh, Scotland. He is best known for
creating the iconic detective Sherlock Holmes, who first appeared in the novel
"A Study in Scarlet" in 18871. Doyle's Sherlock Holmes stories are
considered milestones in the field of crime fiction.
In addition to the Holmes stories, Doyle wrote a variety of
other works, including fantasy and science fiction stories about Professor
Challenger, humorous stories about the Napoleonic soldier Brigadier Gerard,
plays, romances, poetry, non-fiction, and historical novels. One of his early
short stories, "J. Habakuk Jephson's Statement" (1884), helped to
popularize the mystery of the brigantine Mary Celeste.
Doyle was also a physician and received his medical degree
from the University of Edinburgh in 1881. His medical background influenced his
writing, and he often incorporated elements of his medical knowledge into his
stories1.
Throughout his life, Doyle was involved in various pursuits,
including sports, politics, and spiritualism. He passed away on July 7, 1930,
in Crowborough, Sussex, England.
Listen to Sherlock Holmes stories
Erika M Szabo
Erika loves to dance
to her own tunes and follow her dreams, introducing her story-writing skills
and her books that are based on creative imagination with themes such as
magical realism, alternate history, urban fantasy, cozy mystery, sweet romance,
and supernatural stories. Her children’s stories are informative and
educational and deliver moral values in a non-preachy way.
Tuesday, March 11, 2025
Flash Fiction Challenge 6 at #OurAuthorGang
Challenge accepted by Erika M Szabo
Pepper
It had been a spur-of-the-moment
decision for the man to visit the animal shelter that day. He had been feeling
particularly low and thought that spending some time with animals might help
lift his spirits. As soon as he walked into the shelter, he was greeted by a
cacophony of barks and meows.
But then he saw
the dog, sitting quietly in its kennel, looking up at him with soulful eyes, he
felt an instant connection with the dog but he was hesitant. He didn't know much about caring for
dogs and he wasn't sure if he would be able to handle the responsibility. But
the shelter staff assured him that Pepper was gentle and easygoing dog, perfect for
someone who lives alone.
So, after filling out all the necessary paperwork and undergoing a brief home check, the man brought home his new best friend. In the beginning, it was a bit of an adjustment for both of them. The dog, who had spent most of its days in a shelter, was now being introduced to a warm and loving home for the first time in his life. And the man was learning how to take care of this beautiful creature who seemed to sense his every emotion.
As days went by, their bond grew stronger as they got used to each other's routines and habits. Pepper quickly became attuned to the man's mood, sensing when he needed comfort or when he just wanted some space. Whenever the man felt overwhelmed with his depression or anxiety, he would turn to his dog for support. Pepper would rest its head on his lap or nuzzle against him until he calmed down. It was like having a constant source of love and understanding by his side. The man also found himself opening up more to the dog than anyone else in his life. He would tell Pepper all his fears, worries, and doubts without any fear of being judged or pitied.
He remembered
the time when he had lost his job and felt like his whole world was crashing
down. He had sat on the couch, feeling defeated and hopeless, when the dog came
and curled up next to him. Its warmth and presence were enough to make him feel
better.
Then there was
the time when his doctor tried to find the right medication to control his
panic attacks, he had gone through a tough time. He cried himself to sleep
every night, but the dog would lie next to him, offering silent support until
he fell asleep. The man realized that Pepper's natural instinct to offer
comfort and love was exactly what he needed during those difficult times.
The bond between them only grew stronger with each passing day. The man found himself relying on the dog more than ever, not just for emotional support but also as a source of joy and happiness. Together they would go for walks in the park, play fetch in their backyard, or simply cuddle up on the couch watching TV. The man couldn't imagine his life without this furry friend who had brought so much love into it. And as they continued their journey together, both man and dog knew that they had found something special in each other - a bond that could never be broken.
Twelve years flew by but now, as he
sobbed into Pepper’s fur, he knew that their time together was limited. The vet
had just given him the heartbreaking news that the dog's condition was
terminal, and it would only be a matter of weeks before he passed away.
Through tears
and sobs, the man whispered words of love and gratitude to the dog, thanking him for being there when no one else was. As he wiped away his tears, the man made a promise to
always be there for this loyal companion who had never left his side. And with
that thought in mind, he hugged the dog tightly once again.
The man knew
that no matter what happened in life, this dog would always hold a special
place in his heart for being more than just a pet - but a true emotional
support companion who had changed his life forever.
Erika M Szabo
Erika loves to dance to her own tunes and follow her dreams, introducing her story-writing skills and her books that are based on creative imagination with themes such as magical realism, alternate history, urban fantasy, cozy mystery, sweet romance, and supernatural stories. Her children’s stories are informative and educational and deliver moral values in a non-preachy way.
Monday, March 10, 2025
Campfire Stories 10 at #OurAuthorGang
A short story by Guest Author Sara Sartagne
You can’t tell a book by its cover
Dan threw another log on the fire, and a
plume of smoke rose from the flames. With a sigh, he sank onto the ground,
picked up his coffee and raised an eyebrow at Carla and Joe, sprawled on a rug.
Carla smiled lazily through the haze of the fire and then gazed at the
darkening heavens.
“The stars out here are amazing,” she said.
“Isn’t that the Orion constellation?”
Joe grinned at his wife of ten years. “How
did I end up with such a brainy missus?”
“You fell in love with my arse, didn’t you?
I don’t recall you looking at my brain when we met,” Carla teased him.
Dan chuckled, his eyes fixed on the leaping
flames. “A pretty face isn’t everything. There’s a legend told round these
parts about a man who won his heart’s desire by seeing past a woman’s looks.”
“Oh? Isn’t attraction based on what we look
like?” Joe said, sceptical.
“Not for those who are wise,” replied Dan.
“What’s the story?” Carla asked, sitting up
and leaning forward eagerly. Dan’s grey eyes narrowed against the glare of the firelight,
and he began to speak.
“Long ago, a traveller was riding this land
when he was set upon by robbers. As the blows hit his body, he feared he would
die. But then, with screams of terror, the robbers fled as a shadowy figure
armed with a staff began to rain blows on them, and a huge dog sank its jaws
into their unprotected arms and legs. The traveller, whose name was Gareth,
lifted his head to see a tall woman in a cloak. When she looked at him, he
gasped. She was the ugliest woman he had ever seen, with a huge jaw, misshapen
nose and sunken eyes, her skin puckered and marked.”
“I think there’s a moral coming here,” Joe
murmured, and Carla jabbed her elbow into his ribs. Dan, unperturbed,
continued.
“Gareth saw her eyes swivel away, and with
an effort, he called out to her. She said nothing, but began to tend his
wounds, gently and carefully. Afterwards, she washed her hands in a nearby
spring and brought him water.
“Ashamed of his reaction to her appearance,
Gareth offered his eternal thanks. She laughed, a harsh sound, and he winced.
‘Tell me your name,’ he said. She told him
her name was Charis. ‘You saved my life. How can I repay you?’ There was a long
silence before the woman fixed him with her eyes. They were clear, deep blue, and
their loveliness, in the ravages of her face, surprised him.
‘You truly want to repay me?’ He nodded,
trying to ignore the ugliness of her countenance. ‘Then I have one desire,’ she
said. ‘Will you grant it in recompense for your life?’
‘Anything!’ he declared, feeling he owed
her his life.
‘Marry me,’ she said, and his jaw dropped
in dismay. Charis watched him carefully and just as he was about to refuse, he
saw the intense pain in her amazing eyes. He recalled how brave she was, her
courage and determination and her care for him, a stranger.
Before he realised, he had agreed.
A flash of joy crossed her features and
then she nodded shortly. ‘You must rest a while and then we will seek a parson
to marry us.’
Gareth went through the ceremony in a daze,
barely believing that this woman, who was so ugly it defied description, was
now his wife. He had sent a message home that he was married, but in his heart,
he dreaded the reception Charis would receive. He knew his mother had wanted a
happy marriage for him – but not to a woman who looked like Charis. He was
troubled.
Charis said little on the ride and Gareth
wondered what she was thinking. His heart sinking, he saw the flags and the
townspeople lining the streets, cheering. As they drew near, the cheers died
away and soon there was just the sound of their horses’ hooves ringing on the
streets in the silence.”
Dan paused and took a swig of his coffee.
“Oh, do go on! What happened?” cried Carla.
“I don’t know who I feel most for – poor Charis, or Gareth!”
Dan continued. “That night, Gareth’s family
threw a feast as a celebration, but it was a tense, unhappy occasion. Charis
gorged herself on food and cackled loudly. Gareth’s head began to ache. The
food was tasteless and the lights of the hall too bright.
Finally, Charis stood and held out her
hand. ‘Come and claim me as your wife, husband,’ she said loudly to Gareth and the
whole room went silent. Without a word, Gareth took her hand and led her to his
room. Neither spoke as they undressed.
‘Kiss me,’ Charis wheezed and Gareth,
steeling himself, saw the terror in her eyes that he would reject her. She had
saved him, risked her life to save his. He closed his eyes and kissed her. Then
he swung away, not knowing what to do.
‘Gareth!’ said a soft sweet voice. ‘Gareth,
look at me.’
He spun around and there stood the
loveliest woman he had ever seen. His eyes darted around the room.
‘Where is my wife? Where is Charis? Who are
you?’
Her laughter was like the tinkling of
bells. ‘You ask about Charis before asking about me. I am Charis. I was
bewitched by a sorcerer because I would not marry him. His curse ensured if I
would not marry him, no-one else would.’
Gareth took her hands, and he thought
fleetingly, that they had always been soft, he had just not noticed. ‘Have I
broken the spell?’
She looked sad. ‘Alas no. I can only remain
in my true form for half the day. The other half I will be the disfigured
creature you met at first.’ She gazed at him. ‘So choose wisely. Can you bear
to look on me in the light of day, when your family and friends gaze on me and
despair for you? Or will I be a hag that disturbs your rest and who you cannot
bear to touch?’
He was silent for a long time, and he could
feel her tense as she waited. ‘But this is not my choice. You bear the curse,
not I. What do you want?’
Her breath hitched in her throat, and she
put her face in her hands, weeping. Gareth, alarmed, pulled her into his arms,
feeling her slender body shake. When she quietened, she smiled tremulously at
him.
‘By offering me the choice, you have
released the spell! I am returned to my true form.’
Gareth kissed her again but said seriously
to her. ‘You have so many beautiful things in your character, I could have
loved you in time anyway. Your courage and bravery, your truthfulness and
determination.’ She kissed him again.
The next morning, Gareth told the story to
his family and the whole town celebrated with them. But while Gareth rejoiced
in his lovely new wife, he never forgot her actions towards him, which shone as
brightly as diamonds – and lasted longer in his mind than her beauty.”
Dan stopped and there was a pause, before
Carla applauded. Thoughtfully, Joe took Carla’s hand.
“You know, I’d seen you first when you were
nice to Jane in your class,” he said. “She was being bullied. You marched up to
her and invited her to sit with you. Jane’s face lit up. I’ve never forgotten
it. Then I looked at your arse.”
She smiled and then kissed him. “Good to
know you think something else about me is beautiful. Because my arse won’t
always be this perky.”
Dan chuckled and suggested they turn in.
Sara Sartagne
Sara Sartagne writes women’s fiction featuring
brave women, often weaving love stories through the narrative. Her English
Garden Romance series reflects her passion for gardening. The novellas
are downloadable from her website. The Duality books combine
contemporary and historical plots into award-winning standalone dual timelines.
She lives in East Yorkshire, moving from London to a HUGE garden in 2019.